|Reviews for Joker|
| Darknight chapter 2 . 7/30
Please update your story
| socialgirl378 chapter 2 . 10/15/2016
Well, from what I can see, your story definitely needs help. I wonder if someone has already offered to be a beta-reader? If not, then I'll try to help fix the problems you have with this fic. Just PM me to give me your answer.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2014
this is really interesting please updata soon
| KK chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Interesting basic idea but you probably should look into a beta. For instance oafishly means to act like an oaf (oaf: buffoon, idiot, fool) while officially is the word you are looking for. There are also grammar and spelling errors that detract from the story. While I like the ideas that you are trying to present you might find you get more readers if you check your work or get someone to do it for you.
| Kanna Raimi chapter 3 . 8/23/2014
I'll be patiently awaiting your return to this fic, my darling Alice
| CielAllen chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
No fair! I got into it and u didn't finish! As punishment u hav to finish this!
| ARandomAuthor14 chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
This story has great potential! Can't wait to see more btw!
| Lucy Phantomhive2 chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
I love it! Please continue!
| iluvfairytale chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
I'm happy your planning on continuing this :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
Can you please update?
| TOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 2 . 11/30/2013
| TOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I READ THE FIRST CHAPTER! IT WAS INTERESTING EXCEPT THE SPELLING ERRORS.
| Jazz'Cookie'Monster-5955 chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
wat da fuck 0.0
ceil and allen are brothers?
now this is what i want to read more of
I. Need. More. Chapters!
| Rain of the Forest chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
ARE YOU SERIOUS! HOW DOES SHE KNOW THAT!
| ClariaVu chapter 2 . 8/5/2013