Reviews for Joker
Darknight chapter 2 . 7/30
Please update your story
socialgirl378 chapter 2 . 10/15/2016
Well, from what I can see, your story definitely needs help. I wonder if someone has already offered to be a beta-reader? If not, then I'll try to help fix the problems you have with this fic. Just PM me to give me your answer.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2014
this is really interesting please updata soon
KK chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Interesting basic idea but you probably should look into a beta. For instance oafishly means to act like an oaf (oaf: buffoon, idiot, fool) while officially is the word you are looking for. There are also grammar and spelling errors that detract from the story. While I like the ideas that you are trying to present you might find you get more readers if you check your work or get someone to do it for you.
Kanna Raimi chapter 3 . 8/23/2014
I'll be patiently awaiting your return to this fic, my darling Alice
CielAllen chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
No fair! I got into it and u didn't finish! As punishment u hav to finish this!
ARandomAuthor14 chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
This story has great potential! Can't wait to see more btw!
Lucy Phantomhive2 chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
I love it! Please continue!
iluvfairytale chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
I'm happy your planning on continuing this :D
Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
Can you please update?
TOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 2 . 11/30/2013
OMGWAITWHAT?!MOREIWANTMORE!THATLASTPARTWASINTERESTING!
TOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I READ THE FIRST CHAPTER! IT WAS INTERESTING EXCEPT THE SPELLING ERRORS.
Jazz'Cookie'Monster-5955 chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
wat da fuck 0.0
ceil and allen are brothers?
now this is what i want to read more of
I. Need. More. Chapters!
Rain of the Forest chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
ARE YOU SERIOUS! HOW DOES SHE KNOW THAT!
ClariaVu chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
What!? B-but...!
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