Reviews for Timeless
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Oh wow, that was deliciously gruesome. I really enjoyed this story, but I'm conflicted on how to review, I found it both sweet and horrifying at the same time, I feel like I can't find the right words :-)
einfach mich chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I don't know how you made all this bad!wrongness so hot and almost sweet, but I am so fucking glad you did. I LOVE this so much. No surprise that I love your Demetri, but the chemistry between him and Felix is beautiful.

I love their banter, the seductive feel of their hunting and the brutal kill was fantastic!

I have never really shipped these two before now, but your boys have sold me on it being canon. UNF!

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this awesome fic.
theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
There's something about the supernatural POV. It can make even things like murder and barely (if at all) consensual sex seem sickly all right. Your words themselves were lovely, the tone sensual - quite a feat, considering the dangers of the subject matter. Horror is right. But I liked it anyway. Especially the elements of connection between Felix and Demetri.
beckybrit chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Wow! I loved that. Felix and Demetri were awesomely evil and extremely hot together. I loved the way the humans were semi aware of what was going on while F&D ordered them around.

OnTheTurningAway chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Weeeee! This is so depraved and terrifying and more than I ever could have asked for! I loved how comfortable and practiced Felix and Demetri's actions were and I LOL'd when Demetri asked Felix what would turn his frown upside down. Haha. It was charming and sweet, and a lovely contrast to the horrific acts they were about to commit. And porrrn! Bloody, dub-con, f*ckhot p*rn with poor unassuming tourists! Silly couple. LOL.

Thank you SO MUCH for filling my prompt. This was amazeballs. Bloody perfect, actually. *snicker* xoxo
ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Shoe! You wrote hot dirty gruesome bloody PWP vamp slashy porn! It was awesome! I'll always love your Demetri and I can see the Felix does too. Who wouldn't want to watch? And Felix is so bossy! I love it!

Some of my favorite parts were the little things, like Demetri asking how he could turn that frown upside down, Felix "whatever"-ing Jane (hee), the food endearments. Such naughty boys. I loved their dinner date! It was sort of... romantic.

As always, absolutely bloody delicious! I love you, Shoe!

bbbluez chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
I've missed you're stories. You always come up with the most unique pairings. Amazing!
Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Look at you getting your PWP on! This was such an interesting scenario- it's no less than I'd expect from vampires in the bloodthirsty perversity of their natures. I liked not knowing the victims' names- it rang true for Demetri and Felix not to ever know or enquire about them either.

The close relationship between sex, blood and death in vampirism has been explored in works of fiction over a hundred years. Here, you've shown us just how close that relationship is. Well done on showing the vampires as the true Cold Ones, with no regard for human life outside of the blood it houses in pretty, disposable packages.