|Reviews for Consign Me Not to Darkness|
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/22/2013
Geez was she really pushing him to have sex with her? Uhhhh selfish.
| 1avidfan chapter 28 . 10/31/2013
Ok, THE END. I am imagining a HEA for everyone in the story, including Charlie & Jasper who starts raising wolf dogs in Forks with Jasper's girlfriend. Edward & Bella live HEA keeping together with their extended family Rose,Emmett,Emily,Sammy,Esme,Carlisle all with their own HEAs.
At least that is how I imagine it ends under the author finds time in real life, to complete this fictional story. NO disrespect intended to the author, it's only because I got attached to her characters that I needed to imagine HEA endings for all of them :-)
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/30/2013
First of all, I really am enjoying this story. A lot. Secondly, Bella's jealousy issues are totally understandable, considering she thinks of herself as damaged and somewhat plain while Edward is handsome and is her protector (besides being in love with him).
However, she needs to try to get the jealously under control, because it DOES infer that she doesn't have enough trust in Edward. She needs to focus on how much she trusts Edward, as opposed to other men.
Question, does anyone think it odd that she trusts Jake so easily? I am hoping that her trust in Jake is not misplaced. I really can't decide if he is a good guy or not, not that there have been any signs that he is bad, just that it would make an interesting plot twist if he turns out to be a bad guy.
| 1avidfan chapter 6 . 10/29/2013
This story definitely does NOT suck. The characters and their individual stories are very interesting, each of them with their own personal pain. I hope they all find resolution to their life problems and the friendships Bella is developing increase in strength.
I notice that it has been more than a year and a half since the last update. I really hope that you plan to complete this story. You must know how frustrating it is t enjoy a story until suddenly it stops, uncompleted?
Thank you for sharing your writing.
| Tutor-girl-107 chapter 28 . 8/31/2013
This is an amazing story. I was touched by the writing. You should be very proud of yourself.
| LizziePaige chapter 28 . 8/11/2013
This is such a great story, can't wait for the next chapter! I think the McCarty family will certainly blossom by living with Carlisle and Esme. I hope Jasper finds some peace and purpose in his life and I really hope this Edward and Bella get their HEA, they both deserve it! :)
| lmc123 chapter 27 . 8/9/2013
These chapters have been loveley, them getting together and how she feels now is perfect, and I loved that he asked her about the first time, cos he knew how she felt, and she didn't lie. You are a great writer, you give just enough detail to the difficult stuff to really paint the picture, so you can really understand how she feels and what happened, without milking it with too much sick information. This is an amazing story, please finish it, it deserves to be complete, and you should be very proud of it.
| lmc123 chapter 28 . 8/9/2013
I bloody love this story, it should have so many more reviews, cos it is a ggreat story, so well written, the characters are so good, not like canon, but beautiful characters that I adore. I couldn't believe I got to here and its not finished. If you have finished but posted somewhere else ccan you tell me where? I love that they are gonna move in with esme and carlisle, that was so sweet. But pleeeaseeeeeeee, finish the story even if its just an epilogue, this story is so good, and more people would read it if it was complete. I only usually read ones that are complete, missed that yours was not, but am so glad I did! Text - send the word 'pohwer' with your name and number to 81025
| lmc123 chapter 18 . 8/8/2013
Love this story, love that you are not rushing it, she would never be ready to do that yet. And edward, well he is just adorable, to the extreme...
| lmc123 chapter 4 . 8/8/2013
Loving this story already, found you from patty rose fav story list
| epm00012004 chapter 28 . 8/4/2013
I just read the whole story today. It's wonderful. I can't wait to read more :).
| Jdb3 chapter 28 . 5/25/2013
What? Wait...that can't be the end right? I hope not! I noticed that its been awhile since you've posted. Is this the end? I was desperately waiting for the Bella Edward make up sex! Pant, pant, pant! Please update soon!
I loved the pace of the story. The conflict the characters face made it perfect for UST and angst. I thought it a bit unrealistic that Edward was a virgin; a shocker actually. Then again I may have to retread some chapters because I'm not even sure how old the characters are.
Please don't leave this story hanging in mid air...it's a gem of a find and I would love the complete HEA! Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
| Jessterday chapter 15 . 3/6/2013
Oh, I loved the chapter. Thank u.
| Jessterday chapter 14 . 3/5/2013
Yey, I'd love an EPOV.
| Jessterday chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
Oh, Jacob is harmless...right?