Reviews for Consumed
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
god that was so so sad
lesuse chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
This so could have been an alternate ending to the Twilight Series!
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
This was REALLY good but I'm glad it didn't turn out that way in the original saga. :-)
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
BrookeBelikov chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
This was amazing! I loved how you wrote it so the story all came together right at the end. Brilliant writing.
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
A sad story. You did well to show Edward's feelings and how everything took place. I am glad that they all got what they needed at the end.
zkcej chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Sadness overload :(
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
I loved it so dark thank you
bzwifenmom24-7 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Sad story, but the lemon was good.
YellowGlue chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Please, please, Love, open the door so I can get on my knees and beg forgiveness.

love :)


Every last thing she asked me to do, I did, because that's what repentant people do. They owe the victim. And I owed her.

thank you so much for sharing this, bb!


bizarre.ponies chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
That was beautiful.
Fliberty chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
This is so sad. It's hard to imagine Edward taking Bella's life like this, not through blood lust but through guilt.
fuz chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Impressively dark and very miserable. Thank you.
luvinJ chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
That was intese, emotion filled and I found myself enjoying it, despite myself... (you know why... i feel a bit disloyal... dang your talent)like i've said before, I like everything you do. this is proof.
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