|Reviews for Over The Edge|
| kathyb9760 chapter 12 . 2/11/2013
I like this story a lot! Hope it's not over yet!
| GageDeSotoFan chapter 12 . 2/9/2013
Really enjoyed this story so far. Look forward to finishing it. Thanks for the great read.
| Bamboozlepig chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
What an excellent chapter! Love the bit about the fan club and of course you know I always enjoy how you write Roy and Jo's relationship, it's a very healthy, loving, respectful, and nurturing one. Let's hope sun-roasted Roy is on the way to recovery.
| Ariane Rivendell chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
Fantastic chapter. Everything about this was spot-on perfect - the characterizations of the Rampart staff and the A-shift crew of Station 51 at finally hearing the news.
In particular, I really enjoyed the characterization of Roy's parents - it's clear where Roy gets his even temperament. Really loved the interaction of Johnny and Roy at Rampart - so perfectly in character and adored the tender moments of Roy and Joanne at the end.
The amount of tension and emotion was masterfully balanced. I honestly cannot think of another piece - chapter or story - that so so perfectly and deftly portrayed the emotion. There was neither too much nor too little. It was actually very "Roy". :-)
Very very well done!
| Laughing Librarian chapter 12 . 1/11/2013
:) :) What a superb chapter! Well worth waiting for. Bravo! :) :)
| Jrsgirl chapter 12 . 1/11/2013
Great chapter! I've been on the edge for so long waiting for Roy to be found. It had just the right amount of interaction between the characters. I loved the interaction between Roy and Joanne and between Roy and Johnny. Well done!
| Enfleurage chapter 12 . 1/10/2013
This is an amazing chapter that hit every note perfectly and deftly captured the emotions without being maudlin or out of character for any of the large group of people who were fearing the worst about Roy.
One highlight for me was Roy's parents, his father starting to come to terms that they might have lost him and then the emotional tunnel that sets in so that he only hears that Roy is alive. His joy is later mitigated by knowing that Sarah Loaring's family was not so lucky, which was a lovely job of capturing Roy's generous and caring spirit as well.
Outstanding job on the Roy & Johnny interaction - Roy tossing Johnny from his fanclub and then after he thanks Johnny for all that he did for Joanne, Johnny responding by asking if he was back in the club. That was so perfectly in character for both of them that it sounded exactly like something they would have said in the show.
But the best was the intimacy in quiet words and familiar touches between Roy and Joanne that truly conveyed the depth of their love for each other.
A powerful chapter that got it all perfectly right and I cannot remember reading one done so well.
| Trixiedust chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
Was a little disappointed not seeing an update in December, but glad to see this new chapter in the New Year. I loved discovering how everyone else found out that Roy was alive. I'm always touched when you write about his parents and glad you didn't forget to include them. It is very tricky to combine the right amount of emotions without going overboard and overall I think you were successful there. A few sprinkles of humor added in nicely. Looking forward to more.
| KayEn78 chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
Glad everything is coming full circle and that Roy is on the mend. I loved the closeness and comraderie between the crew and the unconditional love Roy and Joanne have for one another. With her attitude and prescence, he'll receive the TLC that he truly needs right now.
Once again, excellent chapter.
| Avirra chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
The look at his father's thoughts definately shows where Roy got his compassionate streak from. Nice catch by Chet on the smiley face *g*.
| Piscean6724 chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
Amazing chapter! Glad Roy has been rescued!
| sandybeliever chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
aww, this chapter ended on a sweet note
| SaraiEsq chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
Ahh, this is sooooooooo satisfying. :-) :-)
| NineMilesNorth chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
This was a very satisfying chapter. It just felt "right"; very balanced and realistic portrayal of everyone's reactions. I think I could detect the 'snapping' sound in everyone's heart as a missing piece was gently tapped back in place. "I bet my sweet knees..." is one of my favorite lines.
| HeroWorshiper chapter 12 . 1/9/2013
Aaaaw! Sniffff... That was such a tenderly sweet chapter. I'm so glad Roy is safe now and being taken care of. Man! Between the two of us lately, the "Roy doll" has been through the wringer. He must be exhausted! We need to make our New Years resolutions to take better care of our fella!