Reviews for Schoolyard Scuffle
Ishte chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
This is awesome too. You have some tense and person errors. It looks like you may have started it out in second person present tense, and then changed your mind to write it third person past personal. There are some of those present tense and second person artifacts here and there.

I don't know why, but I love stories of Little!Ed when he's a being a little scrapper. Just proves that not much changed when he got older. Always getting into fights and troubles for all the right reasons... and usually coming out better than much bigger and should be stronger opponents against great odds.
Misselis chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
omg thats so cuteee! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! go edo! OMG THATS SO CUTE!
JayEmGee chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Ed is the coolest. Especially when defending Winry :)
Athenafrodite chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
AWW I figured it was about Winry, it was so sweet! I never really picture this but I'm sure Ed was very protective of her.

Amazing. Lovely. Loved it :D to favorites!