please update soon

Other than a few spelling errors, it's a really great start to your story. I really love these types of HP fanfics where Harry tries to fix his life for the better. I also thought it was an interesting choice to habe him travel back only a year. Most timetravel fics would usually start in Harry's 7th year and go to his 1st year. I like that you have it where he goes to the summer after his 3rd year when he was currently in his 5th year. I can't wait to read more!

Interesting so far. Look forward to seeing more. Good moves on his classes. Never could figure out why he stayed with divination when he found out the class was useless and he hated it.

Update soon please! ;D

Good way to take the second chapter. I like the fact that Harry is making smarter decisions, and actually preparing for things to come. The contacts thing was a little much for him to stumble into since it wasn't on his list, but still a good thing for him to do. Same thing for possibly starting to be more outgoing and to begin talking to more young women besides Hermione.

Thanks for posting this. Can we hope for future postings to have fewer days before they happen? We can only hope.

Hi! I've read both chapters in a row, so might as well review them together.

Grammarwise, it's well written, which is not so common nowadays, so it makes the story easy to read (and understand) and appreciate the plot better

As for the plot, for the moment I think it's rather standard, the whole back-in-time-to-make-things-better theme has been seen before, but those kind of stories are my cup of tea, so nothing to criticize there. However, since they are introductory, I really look forward to the next chapters. I think it's a very promising story, and I really like your portrayal of Harry, so please continue to write at your own leisure.

I'd like to say "keep up the good work", but it sounds rather patronizing. But the sentiment's there :)

I like the fact that you glazed over some of the mundane details, like Harry taking a little longer to accept he’s back in time, dialogue with store owners and at Gringotts, the exception being with the witch optometrist. Please don’t make this a Harry/ Ginny fic, you see enough of them out there as is. Also, plus marks for clearly not making this Slash (another overdone aspect of fanfiction, not to mention, not my cup of tea), this fact alone makes me continue to read anything you post.

very good

I like the premis... You get a Harry with slightly more information, but not radically more mature than he should be.

I have an idea I'm not sure how to work into one of my WIP's, and it might fit into your story if your interested. The MOM incident happened after Harry learned his dad was a prat. If he makes a small effort to reconcile his brilliant dad who married Lilly to the relatively viscous prankster. I have an answer: if you go with a fan fiction geneology of James Potter being the son of Charlus Potter and Dorea Black. The Black family has a history of madness. AKA Bellatrix.. even sirius isn't totally sane. So if James Is 1/2 black that would explain the erratic vicsous temprament. And as 1/4 Black give your Harry a potentially vicsous streak himself if you need it.