Reviews for Strawberry manic
Sighclxps chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
XD Lol, You should've ended it better!
Aetero Cailo chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
just .No! Don't screw a story up.
bringonthespam chapter 6 . 6/15/2012
I like how his name is staying as "The Moderator", it just kind of adds that quirky feel to his character.
bringonthespam chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
Shizuma drunk would be hilarious to watch wandering the hallways, hitting on other girls or telling her annoying council members to shove of lol!
bringonthespam chapter 4 . 6/14/2012
It would be pretty interesting to see how one guy would fare at this kind of school. I like how Shizuma's dirty inner thoughts are expressed about the girls there, especially Nagisa. Pretty good so far. Can't wait to see a continuation if that's at all possible.
La Sanguine chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Could use some proof-reading, and have spaces placed in the corrected areas. A space should be used after a new sentence is started. You missed quite a lot of uses with parenthesis ("-these-"), and your pacing is a bit off, shoving too many scenarios forward before establishing them as part of the story and keeping close to the flow of the story.
Random chapter 2 . 12/21/2011