Reviews for Fallen Phoenix
maana999 chapter 15 . 5/1
That was a good ending of the first year.
I like how Albus found out about Snape adopting Harry.
The best part, however is the one where he can do nothing against it.
So... they're friends with the twins now?
It wasn't in the previous chapters.
Only a plan to befriend them was there.
Just saying.
maana999 chapter 14 . 5/1
*starts fangirling like an idiot*
I'm going to read the next chapter, ok?
This is way to good to stop now to give any bigger reply.
maana999 chapter 13 . 5/1
You are a horrible, horrible person.
But at least, now you gave them an actual REASON to go after the stone.
I mean, Harry's pretty stupid in his first year, isn't he?
There were a lot of other teachers who could have helped them.
maana999 chapter 12 . 5/1
Good luck with that Draco.
That's death's cloak. You can't just duplicate it.
Even if you want to.
I thought Harry knew about Voldy?
Why didn't he tell Snape?
maana999 chapter 11 . 5/1
A new puff, cute.
I think it's kind of bad that voldie descovered Harry?
No?
Loved what you did to Ron in this chapter.
Albus DID ask to bring Ron down, after all.
(Evil grin)
maana999 chapter 10 . 5/1
Yes, Argus does need help.
(Evil smile)
Sorry about not reacting to the previous chapter btw.
Ninjas scare me and I don't want them to be here to kill me, you see.
Now, without kidding, I liked this version of beating the troll.
maana999 chapter 8 . 5/1
Eurm... I'm not sure it will get the world to spin, but sure.
Yes! The twins are mentioned.
Have I told you that I love the twins? No?
Well, now you know. Them and Luna. They are my fav. characters that are at student age in HP.
I love how much Harry already shows his slytherin side by thinking about how to get as much 'followers' as possible.
It's funny.
maana999 chapter 7 . 5/1
Woop woop
A little happy dance for Harry being in Slytherin.
Followed by a big woop for the reactions he got while being sorted at that place. :D
maana999 chapter 6 . 5/1
Haha, his respond to Ron was so Snape, it's awesome.
You can really tell that Snape's the one who tought him everything in that moment.
LOL
:D
maana999 chapter 5 . 5/1
OH...
This is SO CUTE!
I'm starting to feel like I'm in a world made by Huffles now.
Nothing wrong with that ofcourse. My best friend is a Huffle.
maana999 chapter 4 . 5/1
What are you talking about? That was a super cute ending.
I like the revenge on the dursleys. (evil face)
I like that Harry can talk to more animals than just snakes.
It's awesome.
maana999 chapter 2 . 5/1
This is super adorable.
The thought of Little Harry like this is so cute.
nightpurr1 chapter 6 . 4/28
Love this story! I forgot to check when this was wrote or if it's finised. I hope so much it is or will be.
PUBLISH chapter 1 . 1/12
I was all for this story until..

"Uncle Vernon threw the malnourished boy onto the ground in the middle of the living room and stood in front of him, legs spread and hands clasped behind his back like a dictator as Harry scrambled into a kneeling position"

...you fall into the same trap other writers do; making the dursleys act like over the top cartoon villains. Plus he's talking like he's some kind of really normal.
gpmum chapter 15 . 12/6/2016
Thank you for this take on Snape mentors Harry fic. Keep writing, you have such a gift!
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