Reviews for Daddy Dearest
Anatekoira chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
This was wonderful, I could read it several times.
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
This was amazing!
stevenxmaylover chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
omg i love it please let there be a sequel! i need more of this i cant get enough of this. i showed my friends and they start going all fan girl squealing and giggling and blushing! they loved that much i was all like "man i thought i went all fan girl!..." -sigh- too much giggling but anyway awesomeness! plz me and my friends need MORE of this! and i believe others will agree with me on this!...

xoxo, stevenxmaylover
KiyanaTheCrow chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Oh my gerd! So fudging Kawaii! Ok, May-Chan, i was just as surprised as you when i found out the Steven was Champion! LIKE SERIOUSLY!
starlight candy chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Brilliant choice of words :))
Please do write more HoennChampionShipping

I like reading your works!
Flippzy The Edward Slayer chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Love this story
Altenna chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I read this story on my phone last night when I couldn't sleep and I loved it! I've had a bit of a crush on Steven since I first played Ruby in 2003 xD So well written and I personally thought the length was good, I like long fics Their relationship didn't seem at all rushed (which I think can ruin some fics) and it was just all around perfect, well done, you've got some real talent :D
SmilingArtist chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Wow, really nicely written! Really good story!
Sweet ending too :)
nukedase chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Although this is a bit stretched-out in length, I really enjoyed this I could really feel the connection that May and Steven made when they first met, how they clicked. And the conveying of their seemingly apathetic yet loving emotions for their fathers was really well-expressed. I also liked how after reading this, I could practically imagine this as a 'background story' that happened during Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald (almost as if it could be canon). I normally don't ship this but this is a really great story on them c: And of course the ending was sweet too.
UltimateLoveStorys chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
AHHH! love it!
underneath the earthshine chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
I suddenly got into this pairing, and this- this is just amazing.

This ship is my OTP in Hoenn games I remember how I was playing Sapphire, and the letter is just like "I've decided to soul-search" or something, and it was just saddening(except Emerald, but all you do is battle in a stupid cave)... but I'm so happy that they reunite in your fanfic! Thank you for writing this! :D :D
Sweet Monoxide chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I LOVED IT! What a unique story between May and Steven, I always did question the relationship between Steven and Mr. Stones relationship and I just loved this idea you came up with. Especially seeing in the end the two fathers brought them together. EEE! :D What a great story, thank you!
amethystaquamarine34azure chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Awesome fanfiction; one of the best Steven/May I've read. I love the use of the paternal relationships to bring the two together. Out of all the Pokemon games, I thought that the Generation III games had the best story, but left it with many unexplained answers, which probably made it an even better story. A very good oneshot, excellent work! XD
Wuchen 5 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Ah thanks for writing another wonderful Pokemon fanfic, I love your taste in couples by the way :3

I always wondered how was Steven's relationship with his own dad. It was a really sweet story, and I don't mind long oneshots :)
Charles Grey chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
BEST STEVEN/MAY FIC I'VE EVER READ. No need to say more, I think my headcanon of them has changed into this one and whenever I replay R/S/E...I will never feel the same way like before again. Many thanks aren't enough for you '))

P.S: usually when I'm really excited about fanfiction I always leave long review...but for the first time you make me speechless ;v;
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