|Reviews for Fragments of Time|
| Shamangirl1 chapter 3 . 12/9/2013
When and where in Crack in Time does this take place?
Btw I love this chapter!
| Shamangirl1 chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
What planet is this supposed to be on?
| Temporal abnormalities chapter 7 . 9/10/2012
I really enjoyed this, I never really thought much about how the Fongoids screwed up the space-time continuum. Great job!
And oh hai! I'm also an Agnostic Athiest! :)
| RobotAuction chapter 7 . 8/31/2012
YOU, my good child, are an awesome writer c:
| Preemtive Karma chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
These short stories are great. It's making me want to buy a psp to play size matters too, but thats not happening.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
Wow...just...wow. That last chapter is...amazing...
| DarkMousyRulezAll chapter 4 . 5/13/2012
These are really good little stories! :D
I love the perspective on each theme
:D can't wait for the next to come!
| S.R.J.S. Fangirl from Pl chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
I'm the Biggest, Most Faithfull & Truest Fangirl of ONLY 4 video games serieses:
Sonic the Hedgehog
Ratchet & Clank
Jak & Daxter
That story is even interesting. Please, continue that;)!
Don't need to hurry - I'll be waiting very patiently for the next chapters;D!
P.S.(For EVERY Fanboy/Fangirl of ''Sonic the Hedgehog", ''Ratchet & Clank", ''Jak & Daxter" & ''Sly Cooper" Video Games Serieses)
I have a GREAT news - In 2014 Sega, Insomniac Games, Naughty Dog & Sucker Punch(TOGETHER) will create...the anime TV series(2D) and anime feature movie(3D), which'll be a BIG crossovers with thise 4 Coolest video games serieses!
I'm NOT lying - I sent the letters to Sega(U.S.A., Jp. & U.K.), Insomniac Games, Naughty Dog, Sucker Punch and EVEN Nihilistic Software about this, honestX3!
Anyway, you'll see in 2014;P!
So...What do you think about that?
I think it's...TOTALLY AWESOMEXO!
See ya pretty soon!
| KiwiLombax15 chapter 3 . 1/30/2012
Wow. Just wow...I have a piece of advice for you:
Stop writing Fan fic, and write your own novel, as I can GUARANTEE you, it will sell. You're a great author!
| MrBlack103 chapter 3 . 1/30/2012
I don't think your writing style can improve much at all, to be honest.
The situations you come up with to place the characters in are highly entertaining and imaginative.
I especially liked Ratchet's nostalgia of his last 'dreamtime'.
All in all, I certainly hope to see more work from you!
| lolinator chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
making a character death oneshot usually grabs attention too
| lolinator chapter 3 . 1/29/2012
your writing isnt bad but i think it could use a little bit more emotion and that would make it stand out more. keep up the good work :)