Reviews for Red Curls
MaxRide05 chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
I love the way you write this pairing - simple, sweet and honest.
starlight.moon.princess chapter 10 . 5/9/2013
yay!
a happy ending!

i love that seeing oliver is the only thing that can pull percy out of his frenzy for revenge, because he loves oliver enough that all other things are second to him.
and the fact that they kiss each other in the middle of a battle...
well, percy always /was/ a walking cliche, wasn't he?
after all, he said it himself in chapter 2 ;)

this was lovely
well done :)
starlight.moon.princess chapter 9 . 5/9/2013
no wait why would you even do that this just broke my heart into tiny pieces!
and i don't even know who's side i am on anymore.
because i /know/ why oliver walked out
but i also understand why percy wanted to keep it quiet until he was settled in his job.

and the fact that percy feels it's just too quiet without oliver, and that he swears just so he can feel close to him.
and that he /expected/ oliver to leave
*whimpers brokenheartedly*
starlight.moon.princess chapter 8 . 5/9/2013
this was just adorable
*flails*
oliver watching percy sleep and percy not understanding it but accepting it because it's /oliver/
and the way oliver just thinks percy's adorable for not getting something as obvious as way he likes watching him sleep.
and the i love yous
*flails again*
starlight.moon.princess chapter 7 . 5/9/2013
i love the underlying impression of homophobia in the Ministry. in a world as archaic as the wizarding world is, there would definitely be a number of extremely traditional people, all of whom tend to inhabit the government and varied governmental bodies.
and i don't see someone as ambitious as percy doing anything to risk his position in the ministry.
i do feel sorry for oliver though. this line [Still, there're times when Oliver wishes that Percy thought he was worth the risk.] was just heartbreaking.
starlight.moon.princess chapter 6 . 5/9/2013
[He traces absentminded patterns in the sunlight streaming in through the window, just for something to do with his hands. ]
i love this line. even though these are drabbles, lines like this allow the reader to conjure up a picture of the scene they're reading about, and you manage to do that to perfection.

i love babbling!nervous!percy, and this was perfect :)

[but it's them – clashing all the way]
this is brilliant, because it brings out the fact that the two of them are completely opposite, and they should clash, but somehow they just fit each other.
also, it reminds me of christmas carols...
i'm just imaging jingle bells playing behind them as they snog...
i don't even know what's wrong with me anymore.
starlight.moon.princess chapter 5 . 5/9/2013
oh god, this was brilliant.

i /love/ misunderstandings, and it's so surprise that percy would misunderstand what happened at the party.
i also like how percy technically wasn't using penny, and that they can be good friends without any hurt feelings. because in my hc, penny is the greatest cheerleader for percyoliver.
starlight.moon.princess chapter 4 . 5/9/2013
i love the fact that they're playing a staring game to see if percy's going to tell oliver his reasons for dating penny or not.
i love playful!percy, and he's portrayed perfectly here!

i adore the fact that you've explained away percy dating penny instead of changing the entire episode. it keeps things canon and still fits percyoliver into the books.
[Percy's just bent as a boomerang] this metaphor was just brilliant! i laughed so hard when i read it!

well done, as usual :)
starlight.moon.princess chapter 3 . 5/8/2013
i love drunk!percy.
and of course, the only way percy'll make his move is through the help of a little liquid courage.

the fact that you forced ollie to be the responsible one is brilliant, and i think it really shows how much he cares about percy.

this was gorgeous.
well done :)
starlight.moon.princess chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
[everything seems to be going their way]
well, if that's not an ominous start i don't know what is.
never tempt the fate, pericval, never tempt fate.

[He doesn't remember making his way to the field, but apparently he did.]
i love this line. because percy's usually so in control of himself that it's hard to imagine him doing something blindly, thoughtlessly, but oliver being hurt changes everything.

[He can't seriously be in love with his best friend, can he? Is he really that cliché?
It seems, in fact, he is.
'Well, shit.']
ah, this is perfect.
of course the first that he'd worry about is that fact that he's turned into a walking cliche.

well done :)
starlight.moon.princess chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
[She's three years above him – a seventh year. Why on Earth would she be trying to catch his eye?]
Someone's got some self doubt there, don't they?
Oh Ollie, you're just so gorgeous, of course she'd be trying to catch your eye.

this is a lovely start to the collection. i love percyoliver, and i absolutely adore the fact that it's oliver, not percy, who realises his sexual orientation first.

the fact that you wrote [flounces]
oh god, for some reason it just made me laugh so hard. i think it's because that word makes me picture sherlock, and then i though of sherlock flouncing past oliver, and yeah, it all went downhill from there.
[He's kissed the neighbor girl before. And her brother.] For some reason, this really struck me. i think it's lovely how the part about her brother is in a different sentence, it gives the the reader just enough time to process Oliver kissing the girl before landing a surprise on them.

well done :)
i'd sink us to swim chapter 10 . 8/26/2012
I loved this! The drabbles were all unique, but they fell together so perfectly. Wonderful work. It was so sweet at the end. Thanks!
Black Rose Blue chapter 10 . 5/30/2012
Interesting. I loved how all the chapters flowed into each other, but they were each short. It was a different way to tell a story, but you did it well. Bravo!
Louey06 chapter 10 . 5/28/2012
Way cute! especially the last chapter
Shira Lansys chapter 10 . 4/28/2012
Yay! Happy ending!

These were amazing! I loved them!
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