|Reviews for the crooked thing|
| Kirida chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
| jedimasterathena chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
| MayGirl85 chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
| Writer Rider Dirty Thirties chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I hadn't paid much attention to who wrote this when I started reading but as soon as I saw "And much fun was had by all." I knew it was you. It reminded me of (Not) Stalking (Firelord) Zuko.
I loved this a lot. It's really sweet and really good and funny. I really loved the part where Toph would lock them in rooms together and where Uncle has already planned out the names of his seven grandnieces/nephews. This was so great!
| M-useless100 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
BEST. EVER. period.
| huinsutt99 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
This was adorable and awesome, and I loved reading it.
| scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
This was like the cutest thing ever. Seriously.
| countrywolf22 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This was so sweet and just...AMAZING.
| Tessa chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
| chromeknickers chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
So this is fluffy smut? It's adorable! n_n Hehe, I have to admit that I was just smiling throughout because Zuko, the awkward turtle duck with his obsession with this "thing", is just so endearing - even when he's a sad panda. Wonderfully fluffy; I greatly enjoyed this. n_n
| agirlwithacoin chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I don't really know how you do it, but even in something with an M rating, you never cease to make my feels smile. It's amazing, and I commend you.
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Ohmygod... It was just so weird to read (even a few) smutty moments between Zuko and Katara after I read Not Stalking Zuko because in there they act so dorky and shy to each other xD
Though, it was a nice surprise to read something different!
Iroh would name Zuko and Katara's children after teas' name? Headcanon accepted! *laugh* now I start wondering if Lu Ten is a tea's name...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
can i just say OH MY GOSH this was actually legitimately the best fanfiction i have ever read. you just wrote their relationship so well and oh my goodness how i wish they were canon.
especially the ending scene when zuko told her he loves her andhisjs. "He looked at her sleeping next to him in the moonlight and gave her a light kiss on her forehead and whispered the three words that he always tried to say to her when she was awake, but never quite managed." for some reason while reading this i got super emotional and started bawling for a good five minutes. and then i stopped but then i read the poem again and i started bawling once more and oh my goodness goodness gosh just so many emotions. in short your story is literally perfect and please please please never stop writing
| Tamaa chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Cuuuute! Oh how I would love it if they really were like this.
| hawkgirl27 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
this was lovely as well it made me smile
I am only saying that you have to look within yourself and find the other self that balances yourself and then your two selves will be as one self – huh? (this was often said by both Toph and Zuko). i loved that