Reviews for Christmas Surprise
jt148388 chapter 3 . 3/3
more edward and belle stories are the best please make more
Guest chapter 28 . 12/31/2016
Really good story
Guest chapter 22 . 12/31/2016
Maybe Renee and Charlie should have showed more fear.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2016
Great start. I can't wait to see where it goes!
Guest chapter 12 . 12/23/2016
I love your comment at the bottom of this chapter about the baby carrots and it is your story and you can do what you want too! I just had to laugh.. Loved it
Kochabilka chapter 33 . 11/19/2016
Enjoyed it very much! :-)
Ilovetwilight14 chapter 19 . 2/12/2016
Loved it 3
Tagicheartbreak chapter 18 . 8/3/2015
*pout* I want more! Why must it end? It was really good!
Tagicheartbreak chapter 17 . 8/3/2015
Man it must suck not to tell Phil. lol
Tagicheartbreak chapter 16 . 8/3/2015
I am in so much bliss at the length of this chapter... makes me want to cry in happiness!
Tagicheartbreak chapter 15 . 8/3/2015
Wow time seems to motionless in this story. lol
Tagicheartbreak chapter 14 . 8/3/2015
Okay?... Are we having relapses at the end of the chapters? B/c you said in a few chapters at the end I think that is was 6 ish at night and that they ate Bella's food for dinner... thus the reason why I don't write long chapters... I have the problem of writing things over again and not noticing them... It's okay... though... still a great story! lol
Tagicheartbreak chapter 13 . 8/3/2015
Having long chapters are so blissful!
Tagicheartbreak chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
Okay,... since I actually didn't read the other chapters, do they know that Bella is a vampire? I'm yeah I can go back and read the chapters, but I'm weird like that and wont. :/ sorry, I might though, b/c this story is that good, both of them!
Tagicheartbreak chapter 11 . 8/3/2015
Okay so I know that I'm reviewing on this chapter and forward then the first 9 chapters... b/c I was continuing from, well, where the revised story left of. I indeed like the revised one better b/c of the added in stuff, but this one is still just as good! I'm happy to see the complete story, even if it was a older version.
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