Reviews for Protect and Serve: To Protect
Fiera Evenstar chapter 16 . 5/29
I love how you bring out that part of her that wants to help a fellow soldier, regardless of affecting the future. And then I also love how you let destiny take its course with his death. Even if it makes me sad. Excuse me, gotta go find that box of Kleenex...where are you sneeky little-sniff-blighters?
Fiera Evenstar chapter 14 . 5/29
A wandering Ranger of the North giving a Elf that is centuries older than him love advice. That entire scene was priceless.
Fiera Evenstar chapter 13 . 5/29
This has been my favourite chapter so far! This story is truly fabulous!
SortingHat chapter 2 . 4/1
Thank you for doing your best to avoid the Mary Sue trap!
SortingHat chapter 1 . 4/1
Not enough information. For example did the child kill the OC or did someone nearby did?
Erika chapter 13 . 2/7
A chapter on Legolas' thoughts would be much appreciated and a welcome change to Lane's POV - there's nothing wrong with her POV though.

Loved the story so far. All the best !
(No pressure )
-Erika
LittleWesties9 chapter 14 . 1/8
...urgh. Just get together already jeez.
LittleWesties9 chapter 12 . 1/8
Dammit Legolas! All you would've had to say was "me" -.-' ... I sorta feel bad for Haldir
animagirl chapter 16 . 12/23/2015
Laaaaane
adamo393 chapter 17 . 10/8/2015
Oh gosh, im in pain just thinking about laine..knowing boromir's fate.. *sigh*

I loved the ending though! Cant wait to move on to the next leg of lanes journey
adamo393 chapter 14 . 10/8/2015
Wow im really enjoying your story and the way you wove your oc into the world. I love her quirks and everything! Im currently writing my thesis but your story has been my "relaxation" time when i do have it. Thanks for sharing your work and im looking forward to read more!
JediGemini chapter 3 . 7/22/2015
i can only imagine legolas thinking "oh god it's thorin in a human woman!"
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 15 . 6/27/2015
so she doesn't have any actual gift like power wise besides reading minds? she cant like I don't know go all starfire on them and shoot energy out of her hands? to bad she wont save boromir or it seems like she isn't I kind of hope she does his death was kind of pointless and in the end it made his father a fucking psycho that tries to burn his other son alive. same with haldir his death is kind of pointless as well. well I only saw the movies so I don't know if he actually dies in the books
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 14 . 6/26/2015
grr why is it when one finally decides their feelings something gets in the way or they doubt they are returned
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 13 . 6/26/2015
stupid in case you havent noticed you have told legolas all of these things so obviously someone does know you. im glad she is going with them as much as I like haldir I just like legolas more
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