Reviews for Path of the King
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 39 . 12/15
NIGGAH YOU GOT MARRIED?!

CONGRATS! WE HOPE YOU MAKE MANY WEIRD BABIES AND HAVE A HAPPY LIFE!

Thanks for the chapter! IMO, you got their characters down perfectly!
xenosaiyan chapter 18 . 12/14
holy crap... I just understood it! I love epiphanies!

Shirou can understand anything and reproduce it if it applies to SWORDS! However, he cannot do that to things that are beyond his ability to grasp, or if it isn't a sword!

THATS WHY HE CAN'T REPRODUCE ENUMA ELISH! THAT'S WHY HE CANNOT FAKE THE SWORD OF RUPTURE! IT WAS MADE BEFORE EVEN THE CONCEPT OF SWORD EXISTED! TO HIM IT'S AS IF HE IS FACING LITERAL GOD, HIS MIND CANNOT UNDERSTAND ANYTHING ABOUT IT!
xenosaiyan chapter 17 . 12/14
I'll admit, I thought at first it was Medea from the 'regal and incredibly indifferent' part, but when they said the "carry the burden of evil" I was freaked out that he might have been dreaming of Angra Mainyu.
Guest chapter 39 . 12/14
You do realize that trying to make money off of fanfiction is illegal, right?
TL14 chapter 39 . 12/9
Love the story! I hope to see more soon! 4500 review!
SpacebarNyan chapter 39 . 12/9
Great Chapter
Captain Wallace chapter 39 . 12/1
A very compelling read.
H20 Ferrum Dominus chapter 39 . 12/1
And I'm here acting all surprised how people often forget that Shirou is at his core, is inhuman. He gained his dual sword affinity after being rescued by Kiritsugu, and merging with Avalon. He had most of his emotions ripped out of him, making him quite reckless and uncaring if he is injured. And people always say that he is stupid and rash...
zArthur chapter 39 . 11/30
love the story, only downside rare updates.
Sword Maniac chapter 37 . 11/25
UQ Holder amine. Gravity Blade.

Tota VS Fate (clips available on YouTube)

Gravity Blade - obvious description. You can change the weight of the blade. Doesn't seem to be much at first glance, but imagine increasing the weight of the sword at the moment before impact, speed being constant, the force would be massive.

Tota's fighting style with the Gravity Blade was awesome. I wonder if it's possible for you to be inspired by it... Imagine Shirou smashing into Hercules with a 500 ton sword... I think it would be pretty impressive...

You could also look into the sword that belonged to Ichimaru Gin from Bleach - Shinso. Shirou is skilled, and by being able to freely manipulate one aspect of the battle, his swords reach, he would be a monster...

Both these swords are not overwhelming at first glance, but once mastered, Shirou would be more formidable than now...
renextronex chapter 17 . 11/25
you would think that shirou is a little more pragmatic after being taugh by the magus killer but I feel that you are depicting him as even a bigger Idiot than the original, yes he is more skilled and more experienced, but the fact that neither the skill nor the experience translates into risk management even a little bit is just baffling
narukyu1 chapter 20 . 11/23
Rofl Dojima is my favorite character now.
Sugar sword chapter 39 . 11/22
Shirou HAS NOT GOTTEN the ideal of being a Ally/Hero of Justice from Kiritsugu yet as in canon, Shirou gets on the night his father dies..
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22
You could make it appear saber alter for shirou to fight with it and that is that I think that with the relationship of shirou and caster you will cause sakura to break and become dark sakura but when shirou defeat arturia you could make avalon cleanse to saber and that become shirou's servant but avalon stay or choose shirou as his new user and then save sakura to know how to become his new servant you could have shirou use his command seals to save medea from death by an attack or you could make gilgamesh steal from his knowledge with a prototype of the np of medea. You could do that when illya appears his body is bigger and that when he meets with shirou in his conversation they completely ignore arturia and that arturia fell deja vu. By the time you know the identity of arturia, you can have illya reveal it to know her or that shirou discovers it by her connection with avalon. You could make avalon him of images of arturia's past and that he could see some swords like clarent, arondight, excaliburn, caliburn for his arsenal. You could have him use one of these weapons as a projectile when he uses his bow as he does it with caldboldg II
Guest chapter 39 . 11/22
You could make it appear saberm alter for shirou to fight with it and that is that I think that with the relationship of shirou and caster you will cause sakura to break and become dark sakura but when shirou defeat arturia you could make avalon cleanse to know and that become shirou's servant but avalon stay or choose shirou as his new user and then save sakura to know how to become his new servant you could have shirou use his command seals to save medea from death by an attack or you could make him steal from his knowledge with a prototype of the np of medea. You could do that when illya appears his body is bigger and that when he meets with shirou in his conversation they completely ignore arturia and that arturia sients deja vu. By the time you know the identity of arturia, you can have illya reveal it to know her or that shirou discovers it by her connection with avalon. You could make avalon him of images of arturia's past and that he could see some swords like clarent, arondight, excaliburn, caliburn for his arsenal. You could have him use one of these weapons as a projectile when he uses his bow comk he does it with caldboldg II
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