Reviews for Path of the King
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 29 . 4/4
hmm, not to bad but i hope we get back to the HGW and setting soon... hmm, seems like Satsuki and Carren may be in his little harem (thats Caster, Rin, Saber, Satsuki and Carren and likely Sakura)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 24 . 4/4
good chapter... well i can see that if this is a harem that Caster, Rin, Saber are in for sure with Sakura and Rider as likely
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 23 . 4/3
ok, how did Rin even summon a servant when the Grail hadn't selected her yet? i don't believe you can summon one if you dont have the command seals otherwise everyone would be summoning them
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 21 . 4/3
i would just destroy the Crest...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 20 . 4/3
hmm, he couldn't have summoned Saber at all (even if partially) as he doesn't have the Seals, he hasn't been chosen yet...

so he SHOULD be able to summon another servant when he is chosen...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 18 . 4/3
oh man, it would be so damn funny if Rin doesn't get chosen by the Grail, especially since she is preparing the Summoning Circle...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 17 . 4/3
hmm, wonder when he figured out her name...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 14 . 4/3
hmm, if he actually makes a contract with her and becomes her new master than when he is selected by the Grail he could summon another servant... it wouldn't even be overpowering him as both servants would be weaker than normal but it would be interesting seeing him with 2
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 13 . 4/2
Rin does realize she can't summon a servant right? she has no mark, meaning she can't summon 1 yet, if you don't have the command seals you cant summon a servant, she could take Guifords command seals and Caster with them but she can't summon a servant until she is chosen by the Grail
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 11 . 4/2
hmm, seriously this is going all over the place and really has nothing to do with Fate/Stay Night at this point other than characters... now you want to drag this Arc on further instead of just finishing it and getting to why we started the story in the 1st place

anyways, apart from the above this is good but you really need to stop dragging it out and get to the main point already
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 4/2
*sigh* this Arc is just dragging on and im seriously getting bored of it... it needs to end soon (like next 1 or 2 chapters)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 4/2
this is a good story but are we ever going to get to the damn war? it is just dragging out with this whole Archer thing

on a side note, i really hope Illya is in his harem (she's just so cute and adorable), its actually rather rare for her to be a pairing (even in harem fics)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 4/2
very nice... hmm, so English isn't your 1st language? i honestly wouldn't have guessed as there aren't all that many mistakes (only a missing word here and there from what i have noticed)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 4/2
hmm, yea gotta agree with you on than... for someone so set on becoming a "Hero" you would have expected him to workout/exercise to bring/keep his body in top shape, learn some form of Martial Arts and such

anyways, so far this is good
Xerzo LotCN chapter 30 . 4/1
wow ... is he gonna get a new weapon at the end of this? this is getting to the great fighting yea!
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