|Reviews for They Shook Hands : Year 1 (New Version)|
| percabeth1643 chapter 6 . 7/20
Fahrenheit is logical too! ...Otherwise, great story!
| fireball900 chapter 7 . 6/23
Now I have the idea in my head of (in Canon) Draco & co going to the duel location, getting scared off by filch. Then Harry & co going there and getting scared off by filch.
Come morning, both sides are convinced the other side last a trap for them!
| fireball900 chapter 5 . 6/23
I Ike how you're handling Harry's moral quandaries here; his friends are saying everything's fine so he's rationalising their actions, but his conscience his still prodding at him.
| fireball900 chapter 4 . 6/23
I guess I get to see what Hufflepuff Hermione looks like then...
| fireball900 chapter 3 . 6/23
I'm not sure what I find more funny: that the kids think sending her to Hufflepuff is a terrible fate, or the fact that it would probably actually be GOOD for her if she went there!
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/14
i always wondered ) (ow anyone ever played multiple games a wizard's chess. after all, if t) (e pieces are destroyed, t) (ey can't really 8e reused. i always t) (oug) (t t) (ey were, you know, just captured. after all, t) (at's w) (at everyone always calls it in real life, and our pieces aren't even alive!
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/14
...i was expecting t) (e c) (oir to come up again, 8ut not like t) (is. ) (u) (. well, i expect it to 8e continued in l8er years. 80-08
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/14
urg) (. i can't really approve a good c) (aracters slandered like t) (is, 8ut at least it's well-written. and realistic. i guess. anyways, doing gr8 so far! i especially liked t) (e parts wit) ( t) (e sortin hat leadin t) (e new choir. 88B)
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/14
huh. odd to have ron as an a-hole. but it's going to keep happening, undoubtedly.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/14
while it's kind a weird to hear ron referred to as weasley, i'll have to get used to it.
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/13
remembrall, not rememberall. give it here, misterr potter? think you meant mister. it just bothered me.
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/13
about that bottom bit? i think you got that wrong, unless the celsius scale is reversed. 0 is the bp? pretty sure that's for boiling point, and fp is freezing point. so water freezes at 100 degrees celsius and boils at 0 degrees celsius? i think you mixed it up a bit. errors like that are really annoying to know-it-alls like me. though it would be worse if i didn't know, thought this was fact, and being me, stubbornly refuse to believe anything else was right. that has happened before. please fix that.
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/13
i wonder what the slytherins would do with the sorceror's stone. yes, sorceror, i learned it that way and you people who think otherwise will N0T C0RRUPT ME! matter a principle. principle. ayways, this is realistic. events haven't really changed, which is logical, and even though ome bit are kind a walls a text, it's a good read. so far. u0 ****/
(those are stars. the slash is a half star. non standard texty things are hard!) 88B/
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13
honestly. you do not believe anyone is evil unless they have proven themself evil, not by a group they might be in, or whatnot. that is entirely unreasonable, unless i guess they have an identical twin. either way, anti-slytherin prejudice is just as bad as anti-muggle prejudice. any prejudice, really, unless it's against evil people, which is fine as long as you mean people proven evil, and not ones that look evil.
| Dethryl chapter 6 . 6/13
Hey guest person? Login so I can respond to you. I am not wrong about the Celsius scale. It IS reversed. Do a bit of research before you claim to be a know-it-all.