Reviews for Sundown
Guest chapter 35 . 8/15
Great story. My only question would be what happen to Seth I mean we didn't hear anything about him after he went home. Did they not stay in touch with him. We weren't given an update. Did he imprint etc
monica03 chapter 35 . 7/27
Great story, thanks for sharing!
celajwhitney chapter 28 . 6/20
it is a good thing charlie isn't as unobservant as he was in the books and movies. even then he had to see jacob morph into a giant wolf to finally get it.
celajwhitney chapter 26 . 6/20
oh no ! it has to be that weasel edward !
celajwhitney chapter 22 . 6/20
great chapter, all the co-ordination to take care of all the details was good.
celajwhitney chapter 8 . 6/20
why would alice think jasper doesn't have control when she knows he is bella's mate?
celajwhitney chapter 1 . 6/20
Entwinedlove chapter 35 . 5/29
That was a fun story and I liked all the happily-ever-afters. Thank you for posting!
orchidluv chapter 31 . 1/26
I'm so very disappointed that there's not even a hint of lemony goodness. This should have a T rating.
orchidluv chapter 30 . 1/26
Yaaaaay I was wondering whatever happened to the wolves!
orchidluv chapter 29 . 1/26
We haven't heard much of Bella's gifts since she was turned. I hope you'll integrate them somehow.
orchidluv chapter 21 . 1/25
M rating and no yummy goodness? At least not for their first time? Yeesh.
orchidluv chapter 18 . 1/25
It's so refreshing that Jacob didn't go all macho ass seeing Bella surrounded
orchidluv chapter 11 . 1/25
That's stupid. She shouldn't have waited for Edward to arrive in Alaska. she should've called as soon as he'd left Forks...grr.
orchidluv chapter 6 . 1/25
I personally always thought Bella's quick thinking plan to get James away from her father. It's too bad you kept the same stuff honestly.
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