|Reviews for Sundown|
| cigdem3000 chapter 2 . 2/9
Alice has seen Bella months ago in a vision ... she also knew Bella was Jaspers mate... so why did she say nothing (not to Jasper and not a singel word to the family that her and Jasper are not mates)... this is... I donˋt know what to say ...
Why keep it easy when you can have it complicated... Right?
| Guest chapter 35 . 8/15/2017
Great story. My only question would be what happen to Seth I mean we didn't hear anything about him after he went home. Did they not stay in touch with him. We weren't given an update. Did he imprint etc
| monica03 chapter 35 . 7/27/2017
Great story, thanks for sharing!
| celajwhitney chapter 28 . 6/20/2017
it is a good thing charlie isn't as unobservant as he was in the books and movies. even then he had to see jacob morph into a giant wolf to finally get it.
| celajwhitney chapter 26 . 6/20/2017
oh no ! it has to be that weasel edward !
| celajwhitney chapter 22 . 6/20/2017
great chapter, all the co-ordination to take care of all the details was good.
| celajwhitney chapter 8 . 6/20/2017
why would alice think jasper doesn't have control when she knows he is bella's mate?
| celajwhitney chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
| Entwinedlove chapter 35 . 5/29/2017
That was a fun story and I liked all the happily-ever-afters. Thank you for posting!
| orchidluv chapter 31 . 1/26/2017
I'm so very disappointed that there's not even a hint of lemony goodness. This should have a T rating.
| orchidluv chapter 30 . 1/26/2017
Yaaaaay I was wondering whatever happened to the wolves!
| orchidluv chapter 29 . 1/26/2017
We haven't heard much of Bella's gifts since she was turned. I hope you'll integrate them somehow.
| orchidluv chapter 21 . 1/25/2017
M rating and no yummy goodness? At least not for their first time? Yeesh.
| orchidluv chapter 18 . 1/25/2017
It's so refreshing that Jacob didn't go all macho ass seeing Bella surrounded
| orchidluv chapter 11 . 1/25/2017
That's stupid. She shouldn't have waited for Edward to arrive in Alaska. she should've called as soon as he'd left Forks...grr.