Reviews for Dusty
Guest chapter 38 . 12/7
So, young Bella (and I mean young) falls in love with a boy who abuses drugs and cheats. No one ends up happy. Wrap a pretty ribbon around it. The end.
Firechaseswater chapter 38 . 10/24
The only way I can not cry at the end is if that's Edward calling telling her he loves her and their gonna. There gonna be together forever
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25
This story is trash. With expensive wrapping paper and word-glitter ribbon. Word-glitter...it's like your lack of language skills have rubbed off on me!
lindseybee92 chapter 1 . 9/9
Wow it took me 2 days of non stop reading to finish this, and now I'm crying like a baby! please don't tell me that's the end I mean their relationship was definitely not healthy I totally get that but they loved each other, they loved each other to the point of obsession and then he just leaves her. he could have waited until she turned 18 and then came back for her but he decides now that she's so in love with him and can barely function he's gonna leave. I have so many mixed emotions another this story, it mad me laugh, and cry, and cry some more, but i definitely loved it, I loved that you could make me feel what they feel that insanely obsessive love that they felt for each other, even though they hated each other at times. I loved that she had a whole other family that was there for her and gave her what she needed, like a mom and dad like Esme and carlise who was a friend and way more relaxed someone who didn't smother her like her own real mom and dad did. and a sister like Alice who was there for her through everything. I really hope you write a sequel to this one day I would most definitely read it! thanks for the amazing story!
anna chapter 38 . 8/29
This story kinds of bores me but the ending makes me wanna cry,so dusty truely left bliss?if it is true then that sucks,the story's nice but frustrating.
Jadeeeee chapter 11 . 7/23
I really wish I could finish this story, there are no words for how well it's written. It's intelligent and complex and wonderful, and you have seriously brilliant talent. But I just can't manage because Bliss is the same age as my baby sister and the thought of her getting up to this kinda stuff is pretty terrifying! I am really shock though this story is magical and just so so so so good. You should really write more!
Guest chapter 38 . 6/6
My god. What a story. What a ducking story. I mean fucking. Holy shit. My heart...
Guest chapter 38 . 6/6
This story was a cruel and wonderful torture, and I love you for writing it. The way you write is so unique and every word I read was powerful in its context, you are truly talented. Reading this has both killed and resurrected me, and for once, I am not mad about a story ending without any definites. It just seems a perfect end, to a perfect telling of an imperfect story, Thank You, B x
Guest chapter 38 . 6/5
I love this story. The first time i read it I was maybe 13 or 14? Now I'm 16 and reading it now, I realize that despite being well written and captivating, Bliss and Edward's situation was actually really unnecessary. I understood the anxiety at first, because Bliss didnt want to lose her best friend and all of that. But Alice eventually had a thing with Petey, and Petey is Edward's best friend! If she got mad at Bliss for being with Edward then she's a huge hypocrite. Also, Edward was only addicted to coke because he was stressed because of the situation with Bliss. So realisticly, if they had just come out as an official couple they're life would have been so much easier and had less drama and heartbreak. Parent wise, i feel like they'd be concerned, but they really had no real reason not to be okay with them dating. Bella's parents didnt even know Edward smoked or anything, and as far as they knew he was a good kid. Edward's parents loved Bliss, and although they'd be slightly worried about the relationship I dont think they'd actually break them apart. All Bliss and Edward had to do was stop sneaking around, and the story could have had a happy ending.
TheBloodyWhiteWo chapter 1 . 6/1
THIS HAS BEEN PUBLISHED as Dusty by The Elizabeths and can be purchased on Amazon!

It was split into 2 books: Innocents and Delinquients under author name The Elizabeths
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27
I really don't understand why there isn't a following of this story. There is so much more to tell like how Bliss and Dusty will explain everything , how they will live during college after all of that. Truly, I loved this story so much but I am very disappointed with the end. It's like all you wanted was to finish and you miss a lot of things.
dadedidodu chapter 38 . 4/29
Okay, I basically haven't slept in 3 days to finish this whole fic and boy, that was an emotional roller-coaster! Thanks so much for writing this beautiful piece! My head won't get any peace without a clear happily ever after, so if you ever feel inspired to revisit this story, please know that I will sell an arm and a leg to know what happens next!
HarperLane chapter 1 . 4/10
Dusty and Bliss are forever etched into my soul. Beautifully written.

Please write more stories. Get paid to do so.
sway31 chapter 38 . 2/15
Thank you for this story ! Heartbreaking, breathtaking, disturbing, well written ... I have literally no words.
Guest chapter 38 . 2/11
I know you might not be around any more but thank you, thank you so much for this
8,388 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »