God, how does she take this? I don't think I could...

Wow! That was a insightful EPOV! I was hoping for that for so long. Poor Edward, he is so messed up... Thank God he has his Bliss. Will he ever be able to make it through life without the handicaps of drugs and alchohol? Will he ever love himself? So sad...

Yeah, so that happened...finally! I'm pretty sure this will not have a HEA. I can take it, but I want them together and healthy. Edward has a long way between now and heathy, doesn't he? Will he ever get off the drugs?

Awww these two are killing me!

Oh man!

These two are so sweet together! They have a beautiful bond. He only uses Vicki for sex and I feel sorry for her. She grew up hard. Vicki tries to be friends with Bella because she knows Bella is special to Edward. I know she wishes Edward was that way for her. Poor Vicki. Bella is going to get caught by her parents and all hell is going to break out on Esme and Carlisle!

Oh Bella you are so sweet and smart and innocent. Are you playing with fire ? I hope so!

You guys are amazing writers. I don't know how I didn't read this before. I'm so glad to read it now. I know bad things are coming, but I'm still loving this very mixed up Edward and sweet, caring Bella...

Oh this is so sweet, but I know it's going to get bad eventually! God I wish with all my heart that he wouldn't have stole that liquor! It's the beginning of a long addiction... Some people can try it and only drink on special occasions, but others take one drink and their life changes. I was like that with Valium and opioids total addiction.

Holy shit. There were so many times when I thought I couldn't continue reading anymore because my heart was breaking, I felt like I was dying, broken. I can't believe I only stumbled upon this by accident, and I couldn't be happier that I did. I send all of my heart out. Utterly fantastic. So real. So hard. Love. Love. Love.

God! Srsly this is the best chapter you've written till now. Im like totally amazed by how effortlesly you seem to do it. I just love this story and cant help but truly admire the way it is done. Cant seem to stop reading it! Every time i finish a chapter, its like i HAVE to click on the next button and continue, i think i may have become a little addicted to it haha. ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!

I love it so far but the hair color tho

I read this over 4 years ago and have re-read a couple of times since The original with the Twilight names and then as your published version . I love the way you write and this has all the emotion anyone could ever take. My son has addiction problems so it resonates with me on many levels. I have to say though that the last chapter in the published version does not make me weep as this original version you both for a wonderful piece of fiction It deserves its reputation 100%

it's a great story. too many emotions. not enough answers.
it left me hanging...so many words but it says nothing.
gives us too many options without satisfaction.
how can a story be so great with no satisfaction? idk but you've achieved the impossible.
why must bliss be always crying? why does she always have to give? why must dusty be so miserable? why can't he be truly happy? I hated the ending... leaves a bad taste in my mouth after enjoying a feast!

Truly amazing love it! X

This story was so amazing!