I've been a lurker since forever ago, and I've never had the guts to finish reading dusty, beacause what you've written makes me feel everything at once and then leave me hanging, your words move me, thank you for that.

This story is still my favourite. I keep re-reading the last chapter because the flow of the words is just too much. Such a good story!

Forgive my rhetoric, as English is not my first language but I just had to review Dusty.
Epic, one-in-a-million kind of story.
I have so many questions though.
Did Dusty ever go to rehab?
What happened to Alice? Why was she so angry about everything? Did she end up with Peter... or Jasper?
What were the Cullen's reactions after everything?
I want to know all of this even though I have the notion that I might never find out.
So many curiosities. Nonetheless it was lovely, honestly. My only regret is that this story did not have an absolute ending..I prefer they kind of stories that don't leave my imagination running so wild. But it's your story.
Hope one day you write again.
Love it.

I remember reading this when it was first posted and waiting for updates. I think the last chapter took a long time to be posted if I'm correct? So I wasn't as caught up with the conclusion anymore Bc I think by the time the conclusion posted I had forgotten about this fic. so I've reread this fic this week and am confused about the ending. Like did he get clean? Is he going to school with her? Does he talk to his parents? Is Alice still mad? Like it didn't wrap up anything but her parents don't trust her and she's driving to school, Victoria is being nice to her and her phone rings and she gets a sense it's Edward. Like what's his state of mind? What happened to his inheritance? What is he going to do with his life? Where is the epilogue is what I guess I'm asking. Lol do they get back together and their parents eventually accept them? Where is Petey? Speaking of Petey, Alice cheating on Jasper for Petey was different. Most people write Jasper as the best friend but you went the Petey route. Which I can understand as well. It anyway. I just need a wrapped up conclusion...4 years later. Lol thanks

This was the funniest shit I've ever read:
"Mom walked in the room as Alice was standing on the bed, swinging the pillow above her head like a helicopter, winding up to hit Kim."
Like I literally laughed my ass off. Alice is like an uncontrollable entitled force. She gets her eat with her parents. She bullies these girls at school because of who her brother is, she's best friends with Bella, Jasper's gf, and then Petey's whatever. It's crazy. And still so good

I feel like my heart will never be the same after reading this story

I happened across this little book of amazing by chance. It look a lot to get into your style of writing but I'm absolutely hooked. I fell in love with Dusty and Bliss as much as they did with each other. I laughed, I cried, I giggled, I seethed, I sobbed and I hoped. I spent every spare second of four days reading Dusty and although left wanting more from "Hello" it was an uplifting ending - some promises are made to be broken, right? I get this story. I connect with this story. I AM this story. I've been Bliss, naïve and hoping. Innocent and heartbroken. Used and coming second. But I've also been Dusty... Mischievous and foul mouthed. High and spun. Clean and sober. Struggling and fighting. Hiding and lying. Relapsing and not giving a fuck. Loving and being loved... I will never connect with another story as much as this. Thank you for portraying the realistic and ugly truth that drugs are. Only the highest kudos to you

And in the end bliss had only one part. His name was dusty. And I hate you for making my heart ache. And I hate you for making me stay up till 5 am three nights in a row. And I love you for making the best thing I've ever read.

Hi, well I don't even know if you still read the reviews all people write in here. I just wanted to tell you a couple of things:
This fic is fucking awesome, no doubt. The first chapters were slow and I didn't stand Bella at all. You know, being all strawberry blond and so out of character. And Victoria being brunnette just seem off. Wherever, I've been reading it in m phone for over six months, yeah a fucking long time for a fucking long fic. What started as a good way of passing time in the bus to U became an addiction. I felt so related to what Bella was going through since my own boyfriend is a coke addict. Everything felt so real; I wanted to kick Bella for being such a clingy bitch and end uo with Garrett and in the same time I wanted their love to be enough for him to change.

So so beautiful, that is. I keep repeating in my head the way you guys write, like "Hi pretty pretty princess". I end it a couple of weeks ago in a beach in Brazil, go figure, and I steel feel them arguing around me for no reason at all.

Congratulations, it's all I have to say. You created such an amazing story.

You are published ! Innocents and Delinquents by Mary Elizabeth and Sara Elizabeth ! Thank you

You have to get this published. I know you probably haven't been on here for a while but what you wrote here is beautiful and raw. This story is, just like many others have said, REAL. I'm in tears because of how I connected with these characters. It's so easy to forget that they are just teens, but I guess this story just reminds us of how easy it is to lose our childhood. Please think about making this into a book. I would definitely get a copy and have the author sign it.

I've read many many many fanfics and books and ext but this story this book, nothing has ever made me appreciate writing more. It's everything I want in a book and so much more and I've never been so thankful for something so blunt. Because that's what this story is its love and hate and laugh in an empty room and cry all by yourself at 2am and scream fuck you Dusty while at the same time you fall head over heels. ITS REAL. And as much as I'd die for a sequel this ending is so much better left how it is leaving you with questions. Thank you thank you thank you

This is amazing. It would make a really good book.

Reading this again has made me cry all over again. I love this so much and want so much more for them.

. . . "It's me. . . I was wondering if after all these years you'd like to meet."