I think the ending was perfect for the story ! Think about it..
Their love story was full of unexpected moments and so is the finale .
A sappy romantic final reunion would only remove some of it's magic .
A Heartbreakingly beautiful story.. that's what it was the whole time and that's how it ends..
Girls, congratulations you own the copyrights of writing a MASTERPIECE!

Please have an epilogue for this. Great story.

Edward should have to flight for Bliss now.
Better be sober.

B should set her dad on Dim

Liking this again. More action, less flowery prose. Balanced.

Garrett must know. If E attacked him at the concert? Plus I'm sure he sees how e and b look at each other.

Well I have finished this story, but I am finding it hard to breathe without it!

Not sure why she doesn't tell A. She knows she needs to eventually, and if she confides in A, it'd likely work out vs. getting caught or leaving at18 with E.

For once, I want B to be free of E. Can't find much sympathy for him, and she does deserve better.

Thank god B has gotten a backbone and some self respect. But gah... Edward...

Hard to conceive of how he justifies his cheating... But there's the monster, right? And the drugs and drink help to make it happen.

Btw, very like that you've got Garrett instead of jake. Plus V instead of T. And that E is hot blond and ice blue. Yum.

Is it this easy to become an addict? I'm sure it must happen. Like, Nicole Ritchie and half of Hollywood. Its depressing.

Glad they are not cartoon perfect anymore.

Does he really deserve to be so effed up over his parents fighting for a decade? Esp if they're so good now.