Reviews for Dusty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Does he really deserve to be so effed up over his parents fighting for a decade? Esp if they're so good now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's lying to herself that she didn't hope for something from E on VDay. If only a sign or call. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for explaining B! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad for EPOV. And this Alice is the best, btw |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the prose |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is too much. Sickenly sweet, unreal. But love E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo confused. How is B not torn up by him sleeping w Vic, other than the first time she hears it, but then wanting to vomit that he would do V in his room? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, the old Cullens are idiot parents. That'll explain future Edward. Do not get B. She doesn't realize she's got a crush on E til they're sneaking round? Doubt it. He's not her brother, and she wanted to sneak around w him. Had to have known. And what, no rxn when he turns down her offer to kiss him? Not a moment of rejection? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Weird how Esme and Carlisle fight for B |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too much saccharine. Both for her and him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So different. Addictive |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh. Excited. |
![]() ![]() r u going to finish this story because i love it |
![]() ![]() I mean this so much: This fanfic has changed me. I cried repeatedly once I finished it. I thank you for using your talent and writing this perfection. I felt like I lost a part of me after I ended this. It means so much to me and I'll never forget how amazing this is. The ending was heartbreaking, i was so crushed but I love it so much. The beginning to end. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. I loved the honesty and rawness wrapped in princess bellas view. Reading this. Kept me completely distracted from anything else all week. Lol. I kept wishing Bella would do something, stop enabling, stop hiding, but I love the way it came together at the end. My only complaint was the epilogue. I was so ready for her to have gotten perspective and seen that what her and Edward had was unhealthy. I thought you were moving toward them ending. Or that maybe we'd meet them older meeting again and rekindling after Edward got clean and Bella filled out her spine. Idk I loved the story and imagery and everything about it was so captivating I just felt that the epilogue didn't quite meet with the standards the rest of the story set. I can't wait to read through your other stuff. I hope you don't feel like this is a flame |