Reviews for Dusty
MissWinkles chapter 8 . 2/14/2012
First a Birthday Bliss Mix and now Beatss? If its got Peter, Bjorn and John I'm all for it! I imagine Loce has great taste in the classics. The Pixies. Flaming Lips. The Shins. Pink Flloyd. The Cure. Weeeeeeee!

And these two. THESE TWO! Can they get any cuter with their belly buttons? No. I doubt it. I really do.

I just want to stop time and keep them in this little bubble of disfunctional happy. My tummy is all in knots waiting for the crash. Hurts so so good.

xx Wink
MissWinkles chapter 7 . 2/14/2012
I can't believe I forgot to review this chapter! Well, everything I wanted to say has kind of been cleared up by the next chapter anyway. But I tell you, I was nervous there at the end! You girls have done such a great job at describing this little tryst that Bella and Edward have. I just want it all to myself, want to keep it safe in a little box like my own little secret. Perfect sweet and all mine.

Love

Love

Love

xx Wink
tinkrbell72 chapter 2 . 2/13/2012
I love this story already! Alice is my favorite:)

Sent from my iPad via Pocket Fiction
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
LOVE! I can relate to most of this story already...
JadoreJAC chapter 8 . 2/13/2012
Gosh I love this story :)
jbquinn chapter 6 . 2/13/2012
This chapter was so sweet! I loved it! I love Carlisle & Esme! I wish my parents were that laid back! Lol
Demons4eva chapter 8 . 2/13/2012
loving this story, thanks girls for writing this soooo well
AmyHof chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
First off let me say that Out Loud is one of my favorite songs. I loved this chapter. I loved that Edward hates the idea of Bella wearing those boots in his room. I love how he wants her to tell him her belly button aka heart is his. And that they said they loved each other before they even kissed. I know the trouble is comming but Dusty and Bliss are by far my favorite fanfic characters.
aWhiteBlankPage chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
"Edward winks as he passes by. He smells like cologne. He smells like the woods and candy and impending trouble. He doesn't look high, though, and that's good because my dad is a cop and he'd probably arrest him." love love love

It's starting to unravel and I can't wait for more
aWhiteBlankPage chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
"I decide right then and there that there isn't a boy in the world who has anything on Alice Cullen." loved that.

Also loving the fact that you're going to rip my heart out. Maybe not for a bit but the longer it takes, the more it will hurt. GAHHH.
aWhiteBlankPage chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
I love that you've switched up the physical attributes. Esme's "fucking manners" was great.

These characters are so simple and complicated.
BelieveItOrNot chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
The girls at ADF got me curious about this fic. I love the characterizations (even if the ages/situations make me uncomfortable) - I believe the world they're in, and how things are evolving. I also love the way all the senses are included. Beautiful.

I'm worried about not liking Edward, eventually. I understand he's flawed and I respect that. I hope he doesn't get too irredeemable only to be redeemed easily in the end. Give me some hope to cling to! (J/K) I look forward to see where you're taking this.
aWhiteBlankPage chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Vampshavelaws rec'd your story and the prologue is brilliant. I can't wait to see where you take this.
maniapage chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
Wow I am so happy I found this story, its amazing! I Love Love Love it. I do think its disgusting that Edward calls Vic a slut and treats her bad and on the other side doesnt even kiss Bella - madonna/whore complex much? I hope its because he is a silly baby teenboy. And I Love the Cullen family even though I would be raging if other parents would let my 13yearold drink at their house.. Looking forward so so much to the NeXT chapter, please no superangst, just continue! Xxxx
whohellanoes chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
if only they could stay/be like this forever. thanks so much for the story ladies. it really is great.
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