Reviews for Dusty
aWhiteBlankPage chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
I love that you've switched up the physical attributes. Esme's "fucking manners" was great.

These characters are so simple and complicated.
BelieveItOrNot chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
The girls at ADF got me curious about this fic. I love the characterizations (even if the ages/situations make me uncomfortable) - I believe the world they're in, and how things are evolving. I also love the way all the senses are included. Beautiful.

I'm worried about not liking Edward, eventually. I understand he's flawed and I respect that. I hope he doesn't get too irredeemable only to be redeemed easily in the end. Give me some hope to cling to! (J/K) I look forward to see where you're taking this.
aWhiteBlankPage chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Vampshavelaws rec'd your story and the prologue is brilliant. I can't wait to see where you take this.
maniapage chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
Wow I am so happy I found this story, its amazing! I Love Love Love it. I do think its disgusting that Edward calls Vic a slut and treats her bad and on the other side doesnt even kiss Bella - madonna/whore complex much? I hope its because he is a silly baby teenboy. And I Love the Cullen family even though I would be raging if other parents would let my 13yearold drink at their house.. Looking forward so so much to the NeXT chapter, please no superangst, just continue! Xxxx
whohellanoes chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
if only they could stay/be like this forever. thanks so much for the story ladies. it really is great.
bonz245 chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
This story is so incredibly good...I just don't want the chapters to end...thanks so much...can't wait for the next one.
kantstopreading chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
Saw this rec'd on The Fictionators and I am loving it! Totally awesome. Couldn't stop reading.
sueIZide chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
I'm guessing that E holds onto B because she's the only thing that's right in his life and he doesn't want that part spoiled by anything. Oh, poor naive Bliss!
lola8810 chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
powwow great chapter and great story! i luv it, so yea please update soon!
SusanQ chapter 6 . 2/11/2012
I read this and cringe: I have a 13 year old daughter. O.O
vanecullen chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
omg! I'm screaming like crazy! He loves her! And he owns her belly button! and hopefully more than that in a couple of months! Please say yes! Beautiful chapter best ever!
Kgunter34 chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
They are so sweet here, but it's not gonna lastis it? Great chapter.
SusanQ chapter 4 . 2/11/2012
I have been devouring these past few chapters and realized I haven't stopped in to say: OMGIlovethisstory! VampsHaveLaws insisted I read it, and she is never wrong - this story is another example. :)

I can't decide which of your characters I love most. They are all so rich and in-depth, but I may have to favor Alice the most.

Looking forward to the angst, I can feel it coming in my bones.
emerald chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
Love it
ksw3 chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
These two are building a relationship very similar to Closerward. You can fell the closeness and devotion they already have to each other. Hopefully it just grows from here. Bella is so innocent. Sweet. I keep waiting for Edward to corrupt her. I think he is enjoying her innocence though.
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