|Reviews for Dusty|
| aWhiteBlankPage chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
I love that you've switched up the physical attributes. Esme's "fucking manners" was great.
These characters are so simple and complicated.
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
The girls at ADF got me curious about this fic. I love the characterizations (even if the ages/situations make me uncomfortable) - I believe the world they're in, and how things are evolving. I also love the way all the senses are included. Beautiful.
I'm worried about not liking Edward, eventually. I understand he's flawed and I respect that. I hope he doesn't get too irredeemable only to be redeemed easily in the end. Give me some hope to cling to! (J/K) I look forward to see where you're taking this.
| aWhiteBlankPage chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Vampshavelaws rec'd your story and the prologue is brilliant. I can't wait to see where you take this.
| maniapage chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
Wow I am so happy I found this story, its amazing! I Love Love Love it. I do think its disgusting that Edward calls Vic a slut and treats her bad and on the other side doesnt even kiss Bella - madonna/whore complex much? I hope its because he is a silly baby teenboy. And I Love the Cullen family even though I would be raging if other parents would let my 13yearold drink at their house.. Looking forward so so much to the NeXT chapter, please no superangst, just continue! Xxxx
| whohellanoes chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
if only they could stay/be like this forever. thanks so much for the story ladies. it really is great.
| bonz245 chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
This story is so incredibly good...I just don't want the chapters to end...thanks so much...can't wait for the next one.
| kantstopreading chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
Saw this rec'd on The Fictionators and I am loving it! Totally awesome. Couldn't stop reading.
| sueIZide chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
I'm guessing that E holds onto B because she's the only thing that's right in his life and he doesn't want that part spoiled by anything. Oh, poor naive Bliss!
| lola8810 chapter 8 . 2/12/2012
powwow great chapter and great story! i luv it, so yea please update soon!
| SusanQ chapter 6 . 2/11/2012
I read this and cringe: I have a 13 year old daughter. O.O
| vanecullen chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
omg! I'm screaming like crazy! He loves her! And he owns her belly button! and hopefully more than that in a couple of months! Please say yes! Beautiful chapter best ever!
| Kgunter34 chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
They are so sweet here, but it's not gonna lastis it? Great chapter.
| SusanQ chapter 4 . 2/11/2012
I have been devouring these past few chapters and realized I haven't stopped in to say: OMGIlovethisstory! VampsHaveLaws insisted I read it, and she is never wrong - this story is another example. :)
I can't decide which of your characters I love most. They are all so rich and in-depth, but I may have to favor Alice the most.
Looking forward to the angst, I can feel it coming in my bones.
| emerald chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
| ksw3 chapter 8 . 2/11/2012
These two are building a relationship very similar to Closerward. You can fell the closeness and devotion they already have to each other. Hopefully it just grows from here. Bella is so innocent. Sweet. I keep waiting for Edward to corrupt her. I think he is enjoying her innocence though.