Reviews for Dusty
yogacat chapter 6 . 2/5/2012
Best night ever.

I remember nights like this and parents like this and a boy, but not a boy like this.

Also, I'm an Alice.

ILY both, hard.
lauren loves spunky chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
omg i totally love this story! MusicAddict5 told me about your story and i am soo glad she did! :D i love how it's real and the characters are totally different! i am in love with this story! hope you update soon! :D

-lauren
ajs99 chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
love love love love love love this story xxx
kellyprovence chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
OMG! i cant believe you ended there! my mouth was hanging open at the suspense and then ...NOOOOOOOOO...nothing.

I might die between now and next Thursday waiting to find out if he is going to break her heart.

GAHHH!
yogacat chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
dudes, I'm so sorry. I'm trying to catch up...I am so behinder with everything that I love.

I love the end of this chapter.

I love you both.

We were all born to be somebodies princess
dazzled72 chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
This fic is freaking amazing! I can't get enough! My heart hurts for baby Bliss! She is gonna get her heart broken!

Can't wait for more! So glad I found it!
roxiegirl chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
I want more more more! See you guys in a week! Omg I love this story soooo much. It's just killing me! Thanks for all your hard work!
Somebody's Bliss chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
So I read your story every week even though with each update it feels more dangerous, more risky, more like what I know and can't...try so hard not to think about.

I'm writing this review as a past, present and future apology for not reviewing. Most often, I simply don't know what to say after reading your story. Your updates unsettled me for days. When I finally get over the shock of your perfect description of what it's like to find your soul mate in the wrong guy, what I want to say to you sounds more like a confession than a legitimate review of your work.

I dare not read a chapter twice, lest you drag me further down into heedless wanting and pointless propositions.

But the truth is, I never need to read them twice. Your words burn through me the first time, every time. I'm proud to say I've read your work for years, but this is the most personal story to me that you've ever written.

And I know how it should end and though the endings not bad, I just don't want her to wonder if it is good enough. 'Cause I know how that is. But how could she not. If she isn't with Dusty, she will always wonder. She will always remember what it is to have a simple touch work its way right through to the bone...without even trying. To feel someone have that much power over all your senses and not even have the wits to be afraid when your bleeding heart is in reckless hands.

God...I know it all to well because I am somebody's Bliss and Dusty still haunts me. I know he always will.
Somebody's Bliss chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
So I read your story every week even though with each update it feels more dangerous, more risky, more like what I know and can't...try so hard not to think about.

I'm writing this review as a past, present and future apology for not reviewing. Most often, I simply don't know what to say after reading your story. Your updates unsettled me for days. When I finally get over the shock of your perfect description of what it's like to find your soul mate in the wrong guy, what I want to say to you sounds more like a confession than a legitimate review of your work.

I dare not read a chapter twice, lest you drag me further down into heedless wanting and pointless propositions.

But the truth is, I never need to read them twice. Your words burn through me the first time, every time. I'm proud to say I've read your work for years, but this is the most personal story to me that you've ever written.

And I know how it should end and though the endings not bad, I just don't want her to wonder if it is good enough. 'Cause I know how that is. But how could she not. If she isn't with Dusty, she will always wonder. She will always remember what it is to have a simple touch work its way right through to the bone...without even trying. To feel someone have that much power over all your senses and not even have the wits to be afraid when your bleeding heart is in reckless hands.

God...I know it all to well because I am somebody's Bliss and Dusty still haunts me. I know he always will.
stoker fangirl chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
Great chapter. you make B so wise for her age and sympathetic (and even wise girls do some dumb things). Does every girl have a Dusty? Mine married the girl he got pregnant in HS and went on to become a crack addict. In recovery now, thank goodness-and the girl stuck with him, which is probably more than I would have been able to do, frankly. Thanks for writing.
Dawnriki chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
This is so amazing. I adore girly Bella Bliss and think Edward is just so frustrating. Can't wait for more.
BelieverALEX chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
Great long chap like always lol. I would mentally cry for her if they doing it when she opens the door but it would be a "damn" moment!
whohellanoes chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
i will die if Princess Bliss' heart breaks. just...ugh. at least she has her boots on, so she can stomp on some faces if she needs to do so once she walks in that room. thanks for the story ladies. it's very so super good.
twifanmom chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
Ack...seriously, that is a doozy of a cliffie to leave us with! So she is finally deciding that it might matter if he is screwing her, especially if he is doing it in his bed that he shares with Bella at night...yeah, I wouldn't want to snuggle with a boy in the same bed that he screwed someone in earlier!

I swear I can't get enough of this story! I love it! So much raw emotion for sweet Bliss and just a wonderful friendship between Alice and Bella. I'm gonna have to go back and read the prologue and see how old they were during that chapter to get a frame of reference for where we are.

Great chapter and excellent story!
angeleyes73 chapter 7 . 2/3/2012
Poor Bella, Edward is all kinds of messed up right now.
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