| Reviews for Dusty |
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   the odious chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 you are cruel, evil, amazing writers. this could have been a sweet and endearing chapter, you know? first crush and all looming in the horizon, sweetums and girly giggles, and oh, i can so relate to how stupid boys were stupid. sweet nostalgia. but no. that prologue just created this great, big grey sky, and i'm already waiting for the downpour, and i think i'm terrified. and horribly excited. i love this story. |
| the odious chapter 1 . 12/30/2011 you know, this is the first time i've reviewed in, what, a year or so. not that i didn't read good stories, i was just too lazy. i'm not saying you should feel privileged. i'm just saying you're that good. |
| TeamTwilight92 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 I have fallin super fucking hard already. I love it time infinity! i knew you two together would be amazing! You guys are great writers, better than most Best Selling authors out now, and i love you all of you guys stories! Imma shut up now cuz i bet i sound really creepy now lol so yeah, Awesome! |
| blueeyes11354 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 Looks like she found a place with them early. It certainly gives more meaning to the prologue too. :) |
| Artsitina chapter 1 . 12/30/2011 LOVE IT! Amazing work as always. ] |
| SaphiraGoddess chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 i feel like this may be the happiest chapter we would get until much later i may obviously be wrong about that lol loving this story so far |
| tff000 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 good chapter. liked seeing the young and what their relationship is like. interesting to have characters that are a bit different |
| babygirl757 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 Great Chapter! It was adorable to see Alice and Bella interacting as children. And to see the roles kinda reversed for a change. Bella being girlie and Alice being more of a Tom-Boy! I love it! Kiddie Edward is awesome too! Can't wait for more! |
| michellecoldren chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 I am so happy this story has finally gotten underway! I love both of your writing, so I am totally thrilled to read a joint endeavor! I am already in love. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
| ksw3 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 Awww! Sweet! Alice just cracks me up. Different as it seems Esme and Carlisle are not the perfect parents. I'm always scared to start WIP as it's just sad when they don't get finished but I have read all your others and trust you so here I am. Esme saying Fuck was just too funny! Good start to their story and you can already feel Edwards protectiveness for Bella. You always write bad boy Edwards... Luv them. Bella seems really girly instead of Tom boyish, Alice is the rough Tom boy here, could be a lot of fun as they get older. I'm soo looking forward to hearing more... Thank you for creating these characters and a new story for us to enjoy. ... Karen( phoenixrocks1 on twitter) |
| chloe39 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 Love that the Cullen men call her princess. So sweet. |
| frankfart101 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 Interesting story.. I'd like to see where it goes |
| kroseph chapter 2 . 12/30/2011 ! Banana popsicles, orange crayons, jelly shoes, fucking this and Esme fucking that, blonde haired Bliss and blonde haired Alice and then there's Edward, all cool like. And this story is rocking a foundation already. Trip me along, a curtsey for you YellowBella. xo |
| beckybrandon chapter 2 . 12/29/2011 Oh I so love your story! |
| zkcej chapter 2 . 12/29/2011 Wow I'm sooo loving how nice this story is I want more and can't wait for the next thurs update! Thank you so much for this! |