| Reviews for Dusty |
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   tarajo23 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 I am so excited for this and cannot wait to read more! |
| artistic wonder chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 I've been excited for this story for a while and am so excited to see that it's finally posted. This prologue is so beautiful and poetic. |
| TwilightMomofTwo chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 Oh boy! I can already anticipate the angst in this story... but I'm gonna read it anyway. Nicely done, you two. TMOT :) |
| Melany333 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 like it so far |
| lionola chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 Great new story, love the idea! |
| TheSpatulaGirl chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 Fuck. Yes. I'm so shitting myself excited for this story. Ever scince Revelry I've been looking for angst to rip my heart out but I had no luck. I kinda know this will be the story that will do that. Already there are lines and phrases that make my stomach flip. I can't even begin to describe how pretty and wonderful your words are. Fuck fuck I'm just so ready to cry and be hurt. I've got my weed ready for this story. |
| EdwardsBloodType chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 I love this. Sigh. It's such a great little gift:) |
| MissWinkles chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 Oh, Edward. So dirty and broken. I LOVE IT! More for Christmas? Please? |
| bb198703 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 I'm excited that this is finally out! Can't wait to see what happens...teambella writes an Edward like no other! |
| Pyejammies chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 This sounds like it's going to be very angsty. Edward is obviously addicted to probably a variety of drugs. How much older is he than Bella? It looks like Bella is in for a hard tike. Why doesn't he consider her his girl friend even though he comes back to her and is obviously having sex with her? Rubbing my hands in anticipation of another great story. |
| ksw3 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 I always love your stories. I have been excited about thus one since I saw it on your blog. Sounds like another bad boy Edward. Can't go wrong with that! Looking forward to hearing their story! Thanks for starting a new one! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Take care! Karen |
| lebells1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 . .more. Prologue lures me in. Nice, beautiful poetic italics. Flowy writing, small tinges of minor angst, heartbreak, half-revealed clues to answers.. Does Edward has an addiction problem? or getting high & being *with* other girls? Why did he leave bella, and go back to her like she's... not the world of him. Why is he high around her? Why's Bella... willing... to let him do this to her? Oh, my whys... Love it. More.. please, when you're ready... to give? :) bells xoxo |
| Taintedvile chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 I baked Christmas cookies for five hours and then found this in my inbox. I'll admit I did the fan-girl squee - ZOMG it's here! You did not disappoint, it was so worth the wait. I'm loving the poetic sprinkles and vivid detail. Your words are beautiful, so much so I had to read them twice. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| kroseph chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Merry Christmas to us! Two epic authors, one compelling tale. Love and hurt. Wispy breezes and drug hazed eyes. Steaming touches and loving you. Hard. Wrapped. Already. xo |
| Maplestyle chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 I'm kind of scared of the angst, but I'm along for the ride. Already can't wait for more. |