| Reviews for Dusty |
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   AngelSoLovely chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Love it! 2 of my favorite authors merging together makes a great story! This already tugs at my heart strings. |
| svollgraf chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 OMG OMG OMG, FINALY! And well worth the wait Im hanging on every perfect word CAN NOT wait to read more, thank you so much for writting & sharing! |
| bikechick3 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 I (we) have been waiting quite a while for this from you two! Looks like it's gonna be awesome! Missed you, YellowGlue! |
| luv4jake chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Looks promising ladies. I should be reading GoT bk3 but I had to check out the combo of you wonderful authors working together aw. Until next time ladies. |
| Cici G chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Oh wow. I can tell this one is gonna be a angsty ride. Look forward to reading more. |
| cat5050 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 OMG, this tastes of YellowGlue, the hurt and the poetry, speak more of love. This Edward is my drug. I need more. Please? |
| myrobaddiction chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 I so so fucking excited for this story. I know it will be great. It's already sucked me in. Can I have Chapter 1 now? ;) |
| laura-1025 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Ladies - this is going to hurt, isn't it? Welp, count me in. I'm a big 'ol angst hoor and I adore the both of you sooooo, that's a win-win in my book! Looking forward to learning more about these two and can't wait to see where you take us on this journey! xoxoxo Laura |
| abstract way chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Beautifully done ladies...not that I ever doubted it would be so. I'm savoring the lyrical dance between the hard edge and the poetry. It leaves me wanting more. I loved the visual of her winding through the tree, the white halter dress, him pulling her hair. I am there. I can feel all her want, worn down by the disappointment. "His eyes open and I miss his blue." *sigh* There is beauty in even the most tragic souls. |
| Julie.Ann.777 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 I was so excited to see the author alert for YellowBella! I've been waiting forever for "Dusty" and it's off to a great start. |
| IsleEsme1 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 ahh, i cant wait to see where this goes :) |
| Lux123 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 Oh this is going to kill me so slowly, so sweetly. I know it. So it would seem as though Dusty plays with Bliss' heart. But then why do I love him already? Hmm, I don't know, but maybe this has something to do with it..."Do you feel that? Do you feel how fast it beats? You make my fucking heart flutter, princess." *Le fucking sigh* I can feel the magnetic pull between them, the draw they have toward each other. And the power he wields over her. And the tension between them; emotional and sexual. Well done, ladies, I'm ensnared by Dusty just as Bella is. Now gimme MOAR! Por favor. xoxo |
| giantasspanda chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 this is so great, it posted early! im so excited we'll finally get to read it! loved the start! especially this part: 'His hand, my hand, fits so easy. I know he loves me. I never doubt his love. I doubt his intentions and respect. I distrust his motives and allegiance. Love? I smother in his imperceptible, dictating love. He's loves traitor.' i was sold ever since i read that (but awesome summary, btw). only now im wondering if it'll be a hea...? congrats on the story, can't wait to read more! |
| yogacat chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 not like falling more like floating or sinking. warm or cold scratchy or smooth... bumpy ride. Also eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Congrats you guys |
| marveecorp chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 hmmmm... interesting. |