Reviews for Dusty
LittleWing2 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
You can't know how good it feels to read every noun, verb and participle. It's been too long, and my craving, barely quenched by this prologue, is staggering just below the surface. You're back! You're back and I'm in love and breathless once again.
ordinary vamp chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
This gave me shivers. It's beautiful. Such pretty, pretty words.
carebear309 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Damn, you've got me hooked already!
beanothercullen chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Wow really good first chapter. thanks
sincerelybye chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
been waiting for this, I am ready!
Carrie Garcia chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Hmmmm I really like this Prologue. And I love me one possessive Edward. Although I am concerned that it is another Revelry Story. Revelry was really hard for me to read. I do not like Cutting stories and it was hard to read Edward doing so many drugs. I love the Title and the pictures from the blog.
afonz chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Ahhhhh! I'm so glad the wait for Dusty is finally over! I've been waiting patiently for it. I can barely contain myself now.

I love the way it is written. It's beautiful. It really flows so nicely. I especially loved this line: "I know he loves me. I never doubt his love. I doubt his intentions and respect. I distrust his motives and allegiance. Love? I smother in his imperceptible, dictating love. He's loves traitor." Amazing! So it was more than I line, but I had to include the entire thing in there.

I have a feeling that Edward is a bit older than Bella. I'm not sure how much older, but he did mention that things would be different once she turns 18.

I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter. I love where this is going.

PS. thank you so much for posting early and not making us wait until 12am. It's been such a long day and reading this was really a great way to end my night.

xx
kellyprovence chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
i have been waiting for this for MONTHS! MONTHS I tell you! I am so excited!

Great start and cant wait to get more!
twilover76 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Love the start ladies

Already nervous for Bella though.

Can't wait to see where this goes
Ladyniki chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Isabella bliss seems to be living in a fantasy. E has already told her she is not his girlfriend,she implies he is with other women but she is still ready to go sleep with him. But it seems she wants him to want her so bad, she is willing to forget about all of that. She wants him to be someone he used to be but through his drug induced haze I fear it won't happen any time soon. HEA?
Jordanfan360 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
this is gonna be a bumpy road, isn't it?

oh Edward...
jedigirlsc chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
yay so excited to see this story!
blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Different, very different. Not an easy Edward to like, that's for sure.
amandac3 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Oh mah gah! YES! YES! YES! This is gonna be amazing and I can't wait!
Nonita chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Great start..Can't wait to see where this goes..
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