Reviews for Dusty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This truly is one of my absolute favorite fanfics. I come back to this one time after time! You managed to create a story that is so damaged and perfect. It’s perfectly imperfect. If you ever wanted to do more, I would love to read it. |
![]() ![]() This is really well-written, unfortunately just has characters who do not grow or evolve, or have any redeeming qualities whatsoever. The only person I liked was Garrett, at certain intervals. I think what I take away from this is neither of them know what "love" is. It's like I can literally be evil and the worst form of humanity and just SAY it's love? Edward is the shittiest of shitbags. And Bella. Yikes. First I wanted her to grow a spine or some semblance of self-respect if not self-worth. But then I decided she's so pathetic that she actually deserves to be trashed upon by the likes of shitty Edward, and I do hope they end up together, if only so other more deserving people are spared their drama. Ugh. Bliss had no reason to be as pathetic as she was, Edward none to be as fucked up as he is. Petey, sure. Everyone else is just a waste. But hey, your writing was good enough that I read it all, mainly because I was hoping you'd kill them both off in a really long, poetic chapter(s). Ah well. Good read. Wouldn't read again, though. They're the worst. |
![]() ![]() I get that this is shaping up to be a “Bella is young and dumb” type thing, but how stupid can you get? I’m usually all into asshole Edward but this is too much. She’s an idiot. An actual idiot |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm simultaneously more than satisfied with this ending and less than satisfied/crying and weeping because I need more. Anywho, while I sob, I just. There are some stories you love so much and hit you so deep that as much as you love it, you feel like you wouldn't survive reading it again. There has only been 1 other story like that for me, and now there's two. Thank you for this beautiful, real, heartbreaking journey. I can honestly say this story will stay a part of me and how I see life for a very very very long time. Absolutely stellar job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every chapter I read of this story is pure poetry and God, this last chapter had paragraphs ever deeper than the rest - the one about growing up and being the judges, doctors, whoever who just watched these awful things happen when you were young. That one got to me. And I swear y'all have a way of making me feel as crazy as Bliss does. Okay I'm done, off to read the next chapter. Just kudos to you all for this. This story makes my heart swell-hurt (have I mentioned I love your prose?) |
![]() ![]() Shitty story. I mean Bella is just annoying af. Who the hell stays near a person like Edward the shitbag? He's doing so much bullshit... and she just keeps staying with him. And oh man... that ending was bad af! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just can't believe its 2018 and people are coming back from everywhere to read it and leave a review, You are so good, YellowBella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this fic so long ago. I was in my first year in college. This year Im graduating, or next year perhaps. Anyway, Im witing my thesis and I think I'm talking about it. Just so you know. I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a really wonderful story. If there is a part 2, this would be even awesomer, |
![]() ![]() ![]() nothing puts me into a emotional spiral like this fic it's amazing and I can't find anything angstier |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fucking loved and hated this soooooo much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. just... wow. you really took me for a damn ride. amazing. |
![]() ![]() Who else thinks that Edward's character is a lost cause and always was and hes shoukd just drop off the face of the earth? |
![]() ![]() I read this fic years ago for the first time and had mixed feelings. The fic is well written but the whole plot is a constant loop of the same relationship problems. You keep reading, thinking that it'll be worth it in the end when they both realize they're being incredibly immature, selfish and moronic and they'll both grow up and begin a healthy normal non-destructive relationship. But omg no. Edward is disgusting. No one cares if he's overly sensitive and he goes psycho when bella decides to have normal teenage relationships outside her toxic relationship with him. Boy needs to get over himself because the world does not revolve around him. He tells her she can't do this or that because he loves her and it will hurt him but then he cheats on her like the whore he is which clearly shows that he DOES NOT love her and doesn't give a flying fu** about her feelings. Cheating isn't the only thing he does to hurt her. He acts like such a brat but when it comes to love/sex/relationships/alcohol he acts like he's sooo much more muture and superior compared to bella just because he's 2 yrs older. I DO LIKE BELLA and feel sorry for her. She's young and doesn't know how to deal with Edward's trampy ways because she loves him. But at some point in the story she reaches an age were she should realize that Edward is abusive in every way. Even physically. He's so terrible that it doesn't matter that he claims to love her. I love HEAs and always want edward/bella to end up together somehow because they are happy together. But this bella should've DUMPED Edward's STD infested ass ages ago. The guy tried to justify his cheating by saying he wouldn't need other girls if he could do it with bella. Realistically you could just say Edward was obssessed with bella and wanted to sleep with her. THE END. THESE 2 DO NOT MAKE EACHOTHER HAPPY when they are together. They actually just hurt eachother more. I wished their parents would've found out and although i don't like naive controlling renee, esme and carlisle could've helped bella. I applaud the author for the complexity of the story. But it is sickening that a character like filth bag edward even got to touch bella. And she's annoying for allowing it. I read the future take and the destruction just continues. |
![]() ![]() So, young Bella (and I mean young) falls in love with a boy who abuses drugs and cheats. No one ends up happy. Wrap a pretty ribbon around it. The end. |