Reviews for Faultlines
The Songwriter's Ghost chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Wow. That was really well written. That's not exactly an elegant way of putting it, but it's the truth nonetheless. Not many people attempt Branka/Hespith fics, but that was quite well done; Hespith's plight was shown very well, and it was interesting to see how exactly she was drawn in. The use of second person narration was kind of a stroke of genius. It's really hard to use second person effectively, but the way you wrote this was...chilling. Even more so because we were put in Hespith's shoes.
anon chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Ohh...this. This is so very foreboding, poignant and utterly tragic. Glad to read something unique like this. Hope to see more.
Lupe.Farron chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
This a stunning and very well written insight into the Branka/Hespith relationship that we only briefly saw in the game. It flows well and really does make me feel sorry for Hespith. Good job! :)