Reviews for The Duplicitous Nature of Chest Monsters
nayin17 chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
I love your Harry
SiriuslyRiddikulus1o1 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Aww Harry is so innocent in these matters...the writing was good, this made me happy and smiley too..
MsAnnaGraham chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Well that was pretty much the most adorable thing I've read all day. It made me chuckle aloud, especially the blurtish bit. I'm afraid I speak blurtish quite fluently.

Well done!
RodentFace chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Hee, hee, hee.

"...and told me that whilst she may be able to forgive me over time, not to expect her to be naming any children after me."

Good luck with that, one Ginny. Good luck. (Seriously, ALBUS SEVERUS! Did they WANT this kid to get made fun of in school?)

Funny story.
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Funny ending! Poor Harry, not realizing his "chest monster" was his own jealousy...good thing he got it figured out with Dumbledore as his sounding board! :)

blurtish – the language that Ginny and Hermione accused he and Ron of speaking when they were flustered about relationship stuff.

LOVE this! The perfect word to describe it! One little thing though, 'he and Ron' should be 'Ron and him' (him is an object pronoun; he is a subject pronoun).
jilyspottering chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Hahaha! Loved it!
Arocksprpl2 chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Charlotte1823 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I absolutely loved this! I thought that it was so funny!