|Reviews for Dying Embers|
| enmused chapter 19 . 11/24/2013
What a way to end (or should I say start?) a story! This was amazingly well written and every word left me begging for more. Seeing the way you make the character grow through your story is beautiful.
Wow, good job.
| AliceSylvia chapter 19 . 11/15/2013
I cried repeatedly. Great writing and story. Thank you!
| Tigress2929 chapter 19 . 6/22/2013
I laughed, and cried. This was so emotional and well written. Poor sparklings and Jack. At least they are alive still. Loved this. I truly did.
| BulkheadsGirl chapter 19 . 5/25/2013
Oh...MY GOD! I just finished the sorry...and there were so many bitter sweet moments, I laughed, I cried...and as a Mama who has lost 3 * sparklings* of my own...I really connected with Jack. definitely not something to read in public...such an intimate story. I loved the accurate portrayal of all the medical jargon too. That was just the icing on the cake. I came over after reading * dirty Little Secrets* ( another excellent fic)...and I'm SO glad I did.
| Bobfish chapter 19 . 3/7/2013
Make a sequel this is a really good story
| Riyappe Paws chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
OOOOOOHH! HAPPY MUSH!
| Akira Silverwolf chapter 18 . 2/5/2013
I have read this story over and over particularly this chapter. Especially the last part where Optimus and Jack have their father/son moment and it never fails to get an 'aww' out of me... I really love this story and hope you continue the great job at writing.
| Riyappe Paws chapter 19 . 1/21/2013
... for once... I believe I have nothing to say on how I fell about this story... I will say though, from the depths of my consciousness, that I whole-heartily enjoyed this tail. Thank You.
| Riyappe Paws chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
I cried. OH , I CRIED HARDER THAN I DID DURING THE TITANIC! It took more effort than I have needed to exert in a very, VERY, long time. My heart felt it as if would burst when Comitflare fell from the air. PRIMUS!
| Riyappe Paws chapter 13 . 1/21/2013
* hopeful joyous smile* Oh, live for such beautiful and warm moments that I have the imminence pleasure of at least trying to imagine.
| Riyappe Paws chapter 11 . 1/21/2013
WHAT? NO! WHAT'S WRONG WITH JACK!
| Riyappe Paws chapter 9 . 1/21/2013
OH! That's so sweet! I love fluff moments like this! Irrefutable knowledge that can have so many meanings, and be applied to several situations, yet still be just as useful.
| Riyappe Paws chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
I do not fear the dark. I never have. I, however, can not say that I have never not been afraid while in the dark. There is no reason to fear darkness itself, but more than enough reason to fear the ever present unknowns that may or may not reside there.
| keacdragon chapter 19 . 11/22/2012
| MissMary chapter 19 . 10/7/2012
That was a lovely story. I cried in parts but liked the ending.