Reviews for Red and yellow: A lovely Christmas couple
christi1212 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
lol cant wait 2 see how this turn out!
ChillinLikeaVillain chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This is awesome! It has all my shippings and it's entertaining. Please continue it~!
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Interesting start, keep up the good work :D
xxx chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
.. Ipod won't let me finish... Platinum seems to be pretty OOC since she is really close with Diamond and Pearl in the manga. She wouldn't call non of them commoners anymore. If you just try to fix the things I pointed out for you I am sure this story will be super great.
xxx chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
This story looks really interesting, but I noticed some spelling errors; Blue: "SILVER, when you arrived?" while hugging silver u should say when did you arrived and don't write while hugging silver behind. It looks like the reader has to read this to rehears for a play.

Yellow: "You guys arrive" Gold: " yeah we arrive is completely wrong. You could put it like Yellow: 'You guys are here already?'

Gold: 'yeah we just arrived'

You really need to work on that and please could you write this not in script form I am sure a lot of people like it more if you just write the story in POV. When you write it in script form it appears the people less to read your story.