|Reviews for 3 Nights and 2 days|
| PewterTA99 chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
This was cute. Thanks for writing.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
very tastefully written
| Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
| R.A.B chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
This reads like social justice propoganda fic.
| GBTtown chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Very well written! Although the initial premise was awkward and a little OOC all around, I felt the last two nights were particularly insightful and well written. As a trial lemon project, I think it has to be termed very successful. Thank you for sharing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
| continental-line chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
It's a shame that there is no follow up with Harry/Hermione in Hogwarts and no Ron to hold their relitionship in check.
| Runecutter chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
It's an amusing thought experiment, but come on... Molly aiding along some "Hanky panky" so obviously? She always used to split them up along gender lines for such sleepovers and it would have taken to bring some kind of fight between Hermione and Ginny to separate them and THEN make the suggestion (completely innocent of course and presented through puppy dog eyes...) to switch with Harry who's such a good and gentlemanly friend he wouldn't do anything uncivil, while Ron...
Of course THEN Harry would have to confess that he didn't own any kind of nightwear and usually slept naked as he had to preserve the few sets of underwear he posessed for the days... a very pragmatically thinking Hermione just conjures a second blanket so he can stay in the bed safely wrapped and she won't get contact with anything she shouldn't, but when they awake his bladder demands emptying, which won't be possible with Hermione draped over him and he isn't going to give her a show just then... _ Ahh the possibilities, the images, the thoughts this can bring about... lovely mindstarter you've written here!
The only downside (after the initial "misstep" of Molly Weasley) was the grammar... many times the tenses have been botched up, it's really breaking up the reading when it happens so often.
| hpf2114 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Done just right
| Anime Princess chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
| Ben chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
It's a good story, easy to follow and it keeps you interested. I'm very impressed by your writing considering that English isn't your first language.
The only advice i'd give you is that the dialogue reads very formally (although this would be because English isn't you're first language). Try using things like "didn't" and "isn't" instead of "did not" and "is not" as it sounds less formal and fits speech better.
That said, this was very enjoyable. Well done!
| HMSPumpkinPie chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Love it. I think that they're a bit young for this, but I get that if they were older, Molly probably wouldn't let them sleep in the same bed. Also, I don't think that the Weasley's would have let them sleep in the same bed after they revealed their relationship.
| TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Point of clarification, did you change Hermione's birthday? Most people use the canon September 19th, which means she would be 15 on Harry's birthday.
Thanks for sharing!
| The Burning Heart chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Very sweet, with just the right amount of smut. Loved it.