Reviews for Come Back to Me
Smut lover chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
You got a good story but it needs more guy pm guy
damons-hot-as-hell chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
i like it
Junjou Lalilans W chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
A historia foi bem simples, mas muito bem elaborada! Eu gostei bastante. ' Parabéns flor! *-*
CheyanneChika chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Story wise, this is very cute and sweet and heartwarming. I liked how cute Misaki was. Usagi was a little OOC but just keep practicing.

Just a couple of point outs: you did repeat misaki saying "I love taking care of you and being here" followed two sentences later with "I love being here and taking care of you" You have to be careful wth your phrasing. Also, you shouldn't center your stories unless it's poetry or song lyrics and the story is in between.

the slightly smutty half of your story was absolutely brilliant and you nailed Misaki (pun intended) Usagi was also pretty good and I loved how cute the proposal was.