|Reviews for Ballroom|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9
as cute as this story is... I just HAVE to ask, what kind of human turtle needs 15 minutes to walk or worse run 500m? It barely takes me an hour to walk back the 5km from school to home! That would be 1250m each 15 minutes.
| alicelin3 chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
| Ani Hoho chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
HIRLARIOUS! -Aura and Prism
Good.-Eevee and Midnight
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Hrmm... Good story! My first read from this fandom :D. Your English is a little off, is it your second language? Like, when you say, "Uh, I'm not very like the taste." you are saying that Yellow's personality is not like the orange juice. Instead you should say, "Uh, I don't really like the taste." Just practice your grammer and you will be fine.
| Sol's Darkness chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Heheheh… Special always makes me laugh. Goodnight!
| Mickey chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
THIS IS AMAZING 333
| lidijanette chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
OMA THAT ENDING WAS HILARIOUS XD AND SWEET XD My mom just said "Stop laughing." party pooper :/
| Quiet Librarian chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Yellow was so naive (in a good way) and innocent!
So...this is shipping...hmm...i must learn a lot about PokeSpe from now...If only my cousin, frozen, tell me sooner...
ALRIGHT! My mind's made up! Sooner or later, i'll recover from writer's block and make some PokeSpe stories!
| SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Aww... so cute X3
My fav story XD
I think they are in character.
I love the plot and when Red spilled the wine to his tuxedo is brilliant!
Great job, my friend
| Tenebras Lux chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
if i were to agree with you, then i would say yellow is OOC and red is waaaay out of character, but nevermind that, it was sooooo cute! specialshipping is so cute!~~ i like pokeshipping as well but still!~~~
eh. over the top again. anyhow, i'll start again. I LOVE THIS STORY. IT IS SO FREAKIN' CUTE!
anywhoooooo, /"Hey Yellow! Argh! Why you choose to be slept now after my confession!"/
o.O not exactly the best wording/tense use...
| Toni07 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I have 2 words for your story, GREAT WORK! I'd like Special Shipping too. Poor Red, he'd make Yellow unconsciousness (exactly sleep), i'd like that part. *author get frenzyplantedblastburnedhydrocannonedvolttackled (?)*
BTW, i've updated my story (PokeSpe Investigasi (This story in Indonesian langauge, sorry for non-indonesian readers) ), i've a problem with my laptop, so i update it as fast as possible (i only doing 6 questions and 4 dares). But, if you like it, you can tell me your comment about my story via PM. I'll promise, i'll doing your review in next chapter. Please, if you have any idea about the theme for my story, send it via PM, i'd glad to receive your idea, thank.
Bye. *leave with Gold's Lamborghini*
| xxx chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Aww such a cute story, but I noticed a lot of grammar and spelling errors especially at the end of the story. You should really pay attention to that.
| Sleepy chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I love it! Red and Yellow are my favorite characters!