|Reviews for Hidden feeling made known|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Okay so. I support Harima x Tenma, and I really did wish Tenma had remembered Harima's identity. But the critique I have with your fic is that it seems OOC for Tenma. When she found out the other times, she didn't want to listen to him at all, so it seems weird that she's *now* demanding an explanation. It would have worked better in a longer form where there is a rift between them that they have to mend gradually.
| AnimeGirl4891 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
I totally agree that this should have been the ending to season 2.
| SweetDash chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
That's how it should have ended
| The Beta Readers chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Your sentence structure, vocabulary utilization, and the quickness with which Tenma became willing to fall in love. However, we give you points for your comedic value in this piece. Thank you for your cooperation.
| Dr. Snooch chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Although (forgive me for saying this, please) I was constantly annoyed with spelling and grammatical errors, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
I nearly lost my shit when Tenma jumped across Harima's back when he was on the fence! ;D