Reviews for A Gift on Christmas Day
sanela chapter 1 . 4/13
I love this passage so and Jacob is a dad! it is so creative I love it
Rose chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
This is amazing and I love so much.
But I need a second chapter, please write mor of this story.
Bay chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Such a great story! Please add more!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
Edward is a dirtbag and alice wants her little bella dress up doll.
BeckieT108 chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Wow...you had me on pins and needles through out the story. Awesome story!
Beckiet108
Jeri252 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
love it
MISS CLAIRE NELS chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
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PastOneonta chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
This is a perfect short story. Domestic Jacob. Very pregnant Bella. The families together and happy and whole and ready to welcome new life. We were anxious during the birth and happy to learn Bella and daughter are well. The ending is fantastic, just a few sentences that make this story so much better. It was unexpected that Alice and Edward would be present. To hear that Edward was hoping for a reason to intervene and to have it affirmed again that Alice's visions are unclear was perfect. But Edward's line "I never did know what she thought". If that isn't awesome writing I don't what is. Thanks for sharing.
Fleur24 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This was really interesting.

I'm glad that Jacob and Bella's baby girl is alright.

I think Bella made the right choice in choosing Jake.

I rather like the part at the end with Edward and Alice. I'm glad that Edward's keeping his promise and isn't interfering with their life.
Sams Taz chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Awwww they had a baby! So cool! Not cool that Bella had to go through all of that but cool none the less.

I really wish that the Cullens weren't keeping such a close eye on her still though.

But again this was great!
gmb7064 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
That was amazing! :)
stephsmith chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I'm such a sicko because even though I love her with Jake I still want her to run into Edward's arms everytime he shows up.
mcamastow chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
very good chapter . m4rry christmas.
cdeadgrlsampson chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
That had mentorslly scared for a second. I'm actually very releaved that she had the baby & they are both okay.

What a proud father & grandfather. Made me smile actually :)
TheBaker'sSon'sWife chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
This is amazing! I loved how edward was in the car, whatching and waiting in the wings... can you continue but can you get a perspective of how bella felt of all this?

Please, PLEASE continue!