|Reviews for The Champion|
| shugokage chapter 42 . 2/6
Incredible job on this interesting story!
| crocket chapter 42 . 1/14
loved it most make xander powerfull but cant remember him becoming an angel then a god, in some places it seemed rushed but if you life like mine then i can guess why, shall have check see if sequal now up but you do good work
| erik chapter 42 . 1/7
Still a great (re)read and I hope someday to read a sequel.
| Lord Sigfry chapter 3 . 1/5
Seeing wanking and bashing.
All over a blind girls face.
Shame on you.
| Indecisive Bob chapter 25 . 11/24/2014
I usually don't review in the middle of complete stories, but I just had to for this. I've been reading this story, and it struck me how much sense most of the whole Gof situation makes in your story. Sure, this is a humor/adventure story, but the fact is that you've got a Creator God in this story, you aren't making fun of God, and you're portraying God in a very positive manner. This story is so unique because of that. It seems that most authors either don't believe in God or don't want to offend other people by sticking religion in their stories. I love your depiction of God: an omnipotent Creator God who loves unconditionally. Shit happens, but God will always love you.
| TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
| SidJ chapter 10 . 11/9/2014
This story was great until the whole Gaia/God thing started, that just kind of undermined everything everybody else does. It goes back to the real-life questions of "if theres a god than why do innocent suffer and die? Why doesn't he/she just snap her fingers and fix everything?". At least for me it totally diminished all of the characters efforts and made this a less fun read.
| goku90504 chapter 42 . 11/7/2014
Over all a great story well worth the read if you can put up with a fair number of typos most of which were using your when you're should have been used and vice versa plus a number of their, there, they're mix ups as well but still a good read in spite of that
| katikat1703 chapter 42 . 10/14/2014
omg that was awesome.
| Difdi chapter 3 . 10/8/2014
A vampire would arguably be better at CPR than a human. A vampire doesn't consume oxygen, so their lungful if air would be richer in oxygen than if a human did the same.
With the suggestion of that codename for Xander, I am surprised no one suggested getting him drums.
| zha'aiacole chapter 42 . 9/17/2014
I really LOVE this story and I am sad to see it end! Thanks so much for sharing it!
| edee chapter 42 . 8/26/2014
Love this story, not so familiar with Halo, but glad I stuck it out. Would love to see a squeal of some sort.
| x5rage chapter 42 . 7/21/2014
holy smokies god i love this story, took me 2 days to read it all but hot damn i'm happy:) i love the parts with god loving to party and when xander put people in their places, thanks for an awesome story
| Erik chapter 42 . 6/15/2014
Still a great (re)read.
| davycrockett100 chapter 42 . 3/9/2014