Li Chylee chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
sorry for the late review. I don't know the fandom, so I can't say much about the characters ;
well, this story makes me a bit sad. the scene where Hal remembers about his mom is touching, especially when his mom picks Hal up. ._.
I'm a bit confused about the time line, though. Maybe because I don't know the fandom. X'D
Thanks for writing this story!
With smile,
Li Chylee
Breyito chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
This was sweet!

But a bit confusing...this is after the 13 vol end's, is it? And for a wonderful reason, Hal and Kai are still...'good friends?', but not like they used to be, because Kai doesn't let Hal insulted him (or no soo much). Kai doesn't remember anything(anything, not even his 'Kai Kosaka life' or his Eto Kai life, does he? But I don't the 13 vol, Hal remember, why he could not remember them now? O.รณ

Or this is a AU?

However...I like this new Kai! (because I honestly hated when Hal insulted him and Kai said nothing...)Did you write this like Romance or Friendship? I prefer the first but...

I hope read another of your fics soon!

To favoritess!


PS-sorry for my bad English...I'm from Argentina and I speak Spanish...
Yuu3 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Hal...sniff..sometimes i wonder why did you have to go and forget...