|Reviews for Futari wa Pretty Cure Blue Moon|
| Julia Lucrezia Hanazono chapter 16 . 3/2/2014
Awww! What a cute and funny episode! Cake Misadventures. I like the titles you give your chapters.
Also a little review for chapter 15 since I forgot to bring up some things. I liked the conversations between Binbeat and Hoshi. Those were both funny and important to the plot at the same time. But I do have one little nitpick though: Asa and Hoshi were six when Hoshi confronted those karate people in the flashback, right? I don't think six-year-olds are capable of understanding the concept of using people for their own gain or understanding what true friends are. It'd be a bit more believable if they were a bit older, like ten or eleven. I took a psychology class last semester so I know. But that's about it. I'm really liking this story regardless. I kinda notice that every chapter is either important to the plot or moves it forward in some way, and you're doing a good job of it. Reminds me of Doki Doki Precure!
| Julia Lucrezia Hanazono chapter 15 . 3/1/2014
No maid cafes and no haunted houses. Kudos to you for lampshading those overused cultural festival cliches. Yay. I was hoping somebody would do that! Also..."Mid season plot twist?" I LOLed so hard. I want to read more of this! Awesome chapter.
| Julia Lucrezia Hanazono chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Wow! You're off to a really good start here! It's interesting that one girl's a Toku hero fangirl and the other likes cars and is a bit of an ice queen (like her nickname!), very different from the sporty girl/studious girl duo most Precure anime went with. But why is Asa's Cure form called Cure Sunday? I thought Cure Day would be a bit more fitting, but it's your story so I shouldn't complain. Still really good! I can't wait to read more of this when I have time!
| person chapter 27 . 2/16/2014
i love your story! i think you should make either a preqel story about cure dawn and cure dust or you should write an all star movie with cure sunday and cure night! i love what you did with the story and the plot twists! i know it was a beautifully writen story when i was slapped in the face with feels! keep up the great work! XD
| True Lonely Royalty chapter 4 . 12/17/2013
23 more awesome chapters to go!
| True Lonely Royalty chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
Danzen! The two of them are the best Cures!
| True Lonely Royalty chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
Another wonderful flawless chapter! Why doesn't this have more reviews!?
| True Lonely Royalty chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
So cool! Love the characters everything! Absolutely flawless!
| MangamanZX chapter 27 . 5/29/2013
Now I want a prequel story about dawn and dusk...
| Nikkou-tan chapter 27 . 3/18/2013
I just wanted to say I loved your story. I not only related to the Pretty Cures but the normal characters and the villains too. Thanks for the great read
| The Queen of Water chapter 27 . 11/14/2012
| The Queen of Water chapter 25 . 8/31/2012
Cool and Great
| Sc chapter 24 . 8/5/2012
Why don't u finish the story? This is very good!
| ErzaScarlet17 chapter 23 . 6/21/2012
I read your fic and I think it's great, you redid the whole precure thing, there are lots of twists in the chapters, the chars are interesting :) ( my fav is Mireyes :D ) and mostly you created something unique :3 congrats, I hope you'll write it to the end :)))))
| The Queen of Water chapter 24 . 5/25/2012
I love this story. Keep updating. I hope you like my story.