|Reviews for Retribution|
| Oh I am Slain chapter 1 . 3/12
Nice, well-written thought experiment.
And yes, the adventures of Team Overkill need to be written out.
| Story-Lover chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
... you know i like this more as the original. ino (my favorite charakter) died which is sad but her death was respectful and mature. the sasuke thing was good too. the different reactions from each charakter and the way it was understandable and made sense. he had feelings, logic and fun in it.
(thought kakashi knew about that mark on sasukes neck/shoulder too, but it's a mistake that i can easily over see. cuz with kakashi knowing it made less sense that there was nothing done with it already.)
all in all an very good story. sadly it was short but ya know what, better short and great as long and shitty.
| maipigen chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
awesome, I can't really say anything other than that. I enjoyed it!
| X-elemental chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
This was a good piece, though it teeters between prologueepilogue and oneshot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Damn, I want to read more about team overkill!
| ytygr chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
"Team Overkill" it's purrfict!
| Beloved Daughter chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Haha! Team Overkill is completely brilliant! I laughed SO hard! Thanks for writing and posting this awesome story!
| Merry Laughter chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
And much amusement was had by all!
| invisible-gurl chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
overkill indeed! itachi, prodigy and sharingan user; kisame, power equivalent to that of a bijuu(or was it jinchuuriki?) and naruto, kyuubi jinchuuriki... overkill is an understatement... lol but yay for sasuke dying a slow and painful death!
| TheOneWhoRulesThemAll chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Pfft, Kakashi is awesome. I love this idea, especially since no one has done it before. Pure originality there.
Thanks for the story mate, no idea why there aren't any more Inoichi fics. He is such a brilliant person because of the room for flexibility with his character.
| Xinoch chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Very nice fic. One of the best One-shots I've read, and the ending was great. As for a title, you could always call it "The Price of Hubris" or "The Consequences of Hubris".
| INeedAHaircut chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
"No. Because your father expected better of me, and as his only surviving student, I expected better of myself."
Naruto's head snapped up. "You knew my-?"
"I did. And when you're ready, so will you."
If Naruto has half a brain in his head, that first line would be all the evidence he needed to figure it out. But since he's kinda dumb and doesn't like hitting the books and doing research...
| Awlric Hayell chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Well, if you're looking for a title, how about 'Not that Important'?
| Tasoli chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
You are wong about Naruto not reporting the seal. Kakashi already knew about it so if some one has to report it it would be him.
That spoiled the story for me.
| SomebodyLost chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Nicely written. It started out dark, but ended up crack-y at the end, but it's all good. :)