Reviews for Pieces
Spring Awakening News chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Simply the best!

SPRING AWAKENING THE MOVIE!
CHECK OUT THE LINK!

projects/299537666/spring-awakening-the-movie-the-story-that-shocked

AND...

SHARE THIS WITH YOUR FRIENDS AND KEEP THE STORY ALIVE!
faberrynerd chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
sorry, in my last reveiew I hadn't seen there was a second chapter, this bit

'When weeds chain your ankles so you can no longer walk,

When the earth breaks your knees so you can no longer stand,

And more roses have slashed your skin than graced you'

is amazing. its the sort of thing you see with profechanal poem righters, hardly ever people online, your truly gifted.
faberrynerd chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
wow this is really good. people on this fandom, there storys are verry emochinal and creative but there not tallented authors, you are an exspetion. this is written so creativly, your metiphores are outstanding. this truly is fantastic, I aplaud you - I wish I was as tallented.x
LivLifeForever chapter 2 . 1/9/2012
First, can I thank you for your beautiful review on my story, it was awe-filled, comprehensive, and altogether too flattering. I treasure it. :)

And Secondly, I want to tell you that I found this to be a beautiful piece on Ilse. My Favourite chapter was the first one, although I LOVED a lot of the imagery in the second one about times when the earth was reclaiming er body. Wonderful. What I especially loved was that, while most people choose Ilse to oneshot about because she is angst but beautiful and tragic and is one of the easiest to write about (also since she has the monologue of the hghest literary quality in the show) but yours didn't fall into the trap of being easy, you had some fresh ideas and I like your poetic style. It made me come to find beauty in concepts you used that have been recycled often, and make them seem new again. I hope you continue with your weights because I think you have a lot of potential in your writing :)