Reviews for The Last Princess of Narnia
K.Daniels chapter 22 . 10/1/2014
HungerGamesHolesFan chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
Jaslene chapter 10 . 7/27/2012
Darlin' I'm sorry to have to tell you, but your Oc is a Mary-Sue. Sure she had a tough past, and sure she isn't arrogant or cocky, but she is just /too/ perfect.
MCH chapter 22 . 7/17/2012
Poor Issa she lost her friends and became the Queen. Great story sorry it ended.
len chapter 18 . 3/16/2012
wow! :) i love this! i really felt for the princess' plight and i like how you have fit her in the world of narnia. i think that your story is well written though i could see a few errors but it wasn't that bad and i still understood what you were trying to get across. i would like to read more of your story and hopefully it would be soon! :)
Calyn chapter 18 . 3/13/2012
Mary Sue. Nuff said.
MCH chapter 18 . 3/13/2012
Poor Issa. Like how you expressed Issa grief. Good chapter
MCH chapter 17 . 3/12/2012
Great chapter poor Issa the witch just can't leave her alone.

Love the way Issa and Jadis interact looking forward to your next chapter.
MCH chapter 15 . 3/11/2012
Read 14 and 15.

That was lovely the way Issa explained how she felt about Narnia and the duty she had to Narnia and the oath all her family had sworn at 13. I love the way you have written the oath.

How she helps Peter Susan Edmund and Lucy to realise their duty and what they have to do to save Narnia.
MCH chapter 12 . 3/10/2012
Good story and I like your characters and how you have introduced them to us.

Keep updating please.
angel2u chapter 7 . 1/28/2012
Can't wait for you to update! This is pretty cool!
sjamerlinfan chapter 6 . 1/9/2012
really good chapter you do feel for Issa

the line her father said "We serve the people, not the other way round" it sound like a line from merlin

not saying it bad just pointing out

please update soon
MaskedNarnianQueen chapter 6 . 1/9/2012
the story is really coming along great job:)
CherryBlossomTrinity chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
Love! Update soon :)
Chuu112 chapter 5 . 12/31/2011
It's an interesting story. Please update soon!
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