|Reviews for The missing feather|
| therainydaykids chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Jack and Ann never fails to make me smile and you did a great job showing their relationship through the dialouge, so kudos. Also, the part with the double-proposal was major cuteness.
And there's nothing wrong with cheesy if you do it right which you did :)
| SweetieLove chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Awww. What a cute story!
Although a few grammar mistakes were there in your story, I can totally understand if this was a rushed piece. At least you made them totally in character! Cheesiness is well-written, anyway.
| SunnyHoneyBunny chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
I like this! It's funny, but sweet at the same time.
| Breadaknee chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Oh my goodness. You gave me exactly what I wanted. :)
I seriously just love the whole "his maybe-going-to-be-soon-if-his-confession-will-work-wife Ann..."
And don't be so hard on yourself, this was a great gift! Anything involving Jack and Ann both together is always great! Thank you so much and Happy Holidays!