|Reviews for I Can Feel You Pull Me Down|
| The Red Kunoichi chapter 5 . 2/16/2013
Ahhh, it's nice to see an update. :3
This was a nice chapter, Rachey! The replica has been introduced and Hikari adding in her thoughts are rather amusing.
Though, when you put in a dash, like you did here: "But-look on the bright side" there should be spaces "But - look"
...Unless that was the result of typing too fast. In which case, carry on. 8D
Keep up the good work! :3
| Alchemist of Sapphire Flames chapter 4 . 10/12/2012
Yoooooo hooooooooo you need to uuuupppppddddaaatttteeee!
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/26/2012
| Inmate XIV chapter 4 . 6/7/2012
Oh wow...I didn't noticed this was updated until now.
It's good so far, so keep up the great work!
- Silver Dawn
| The Red Kunoichi chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
I will admit, the idea of Riku somehow knowing everyone's name
sounds a bit...lazy, in my personal opinion.
Also you put "by butt" instead of "my butt" when they fought.
Blunt opinions and corrections aside, I do await to where this goes. .
| Inmate XIV chapter 3 . 2/26/2012
Chocolate chip cookies! Or maybe it smells like brownies. I've yet to smell it...
| The Red Kunoichi chapter 3 . 2/26/2012
Ahh, this was a pretty good, chapter, my friend. c: What does darkness smell like...? *shrugs*
Anyways, there were a couple mistakes, such as:
"Now-what to do?"
When you put a dash like that - as in not to join two words together - you should put spaces between it and the words, like I did just now.
And then there's one typo where you put "Mickey said/" rather than "Mickey said."
But, aside from that, this was a nice chapter. *high-fives* :D
| The Red Kunoichi chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
'Twas an interesting chapter, Rachey! Should be nice to see the story from both Hikari and Riku's POV...though, I must ask, will there be any bits from Sora's POV? Just curious.
And don't worry, I listen to music when I write as well. X3
| Inmate XIV chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
I like Linkin Park and I listen to music while I write too! Just a little fact. Really good, continue on!
| Inmate XIV chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Yay! It's finally up!
| The Red Kunoichi chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Hehe~, and so the next chapter in the saga has begun. eue
I wonder how well Hikari will be able to help Riku and Sora...what-with being miles away, and all. I know she can teleport but... *shrugs* it helps to know exactly where one is going with that shtuff. :o
I also noticed this little mistake towards the beginning:
"Sora and his two friends, Donald Goofy..." you forgot the "and." Just thought I should throw that out the~re. :3
Anyway~s, this is quite a good story, Rachey. I'm interested to see where it goes. B3