|Reviews for Mother's Day|
| xXxKazamaLovexXx chapter 1 . 10h
This was awesome but why always Jin has to be so violent sexually towards xiaoyu?
I've noticed that in many fan fics!
This was great and please write more!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
This story has a number of typos as well as grammar issues. Also, a lot of the dialogue seems "forced" somehow. I can't quite put my finger on it.
Nonetheless, it isn't a bad story, necessarily. It just needs some work. I like the ending.
| LilPandaneseGirl chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Awee soo cute I love it! :3
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
AWWWW don't end it so soon
| Swandie chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
ahahahaha i laughed so hard at 'he hate use condoms, it never fit his size'! That means his is really big, huh? XD
| Capriconess chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
OMG, IT'S FUCKING ADORABLE. How can you create such a wonderful story like this?
Maybe you really should consider about writing Tekken's long fic. If that's the case, I'll be more than honor to become your most loyal reader
| Kotou chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
WoW! This story was so good, and oddly so believable! I can see the characters acting in such a way, and I love how you portrayed their "undying" love, even to the point of him forcing her, she still stayed so loyal, and he didn't just do it out of lust, but the passion he carried for her. This was so well done!
| Jen Kazama chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Oh love it :3 You gping to make this more then one chapter?
| XxFireDancerxX chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
OMG, it was awesome. You made my day.