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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this fic so far, thanks for writing it. I think the plot is rather original and I personally love Trixie, would like to see more shipping but that's beside the point. I did not notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, so good job editing, I wish I could help you beta reading but I'm on a trip right now. Anyways thanks once again for writing, I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter. PS: loving the latin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors. Another good chapter, like that you're switching perspectives here. Helps keep it fresh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hrmm, an Elderich book of magical secrets, Trixie and Twilight... I must read more of this. Excellent job, though I wouldn't thought trading with a dragon wouldn't been more difficult. Though that's minor, otherwise very interestin, and a good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, your opening with the book feels short, then again, everypony's openings seem short to me. However, I really like where this is going. Good luck with the rest of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice starr and it has a more approachable style of writing than Cratermarks. You've got me excited about this one, Trixie is one of my favorite ponies. Looking forward to more. |